Please keep this on topic and stay on the commenting feed of support or no support. This is a mod app where this person needs feedback, so provide them the feedback and please don't argue over others opinions.
EDITED. No support. •You copied someone's application. Not only does it show that you can't write something simple, but it also shows that you are not creative with what you write. You should be able to write this in your own perspective, in your own way. •You are still fresh and brand new to the skyblock forums. I'd work on activity, sir. •I haven't seen you online before, apolpgies, but ofcourse it could be timezones. •Building has nothing to do with being/becoming a moderator! Maybe you can add that part to your introduction? To I guess show your passion of building? •Mister, you don't seem very mature from what I've seen among your replies, mostly from the application, in which I'd work on.
No support, and you're perm banned with appeal denied (very happy about that, what you did is really unacceptable).
That is more whitespace than a snobbish country club, sir. You may want to cut down on that before the "Star Wars" title guy files a lawsuit. Looking forward to this application, let's have a look. Nice to meet you, Wimpo. #LogicError: MineCraft was released over five years ago, sir. If you started on SkyBlock two years ago then this cannot be the first server you ever played on. Unless you only used a single player map for three years? I guess that may be possible. Edit section to clear up inconsistencies or clarify meaning. You've played Minecraft since you were 4.5 years old?! You're a born blockhead, sir. That is absolutely incredible. You may have possibly overstated how long you've been playing. You are reversing yourself more often than a valet parker with OCD. We are halfway through the opening paragraph and already: First server ever played on : Started Minecraft when it was first released. Ten years old : (10 - 5.5) Starting playing at four and a half years old. "One day I came on Skyblock" : First server you've ever played on. I understand you may just be stating all of this incorrectly or exaggerating slightly. Please rewrite this paragraph to remove some really eyebrow-raising questions. OR NOT -- My opinion means nothing, sir. I'm glad you enjoy playing with friends, sir. I just asked around and the "shop plugin" was implemented 14 months ago (thank you, RobloxianRoblox). You have quite a few time/date discrepancies. This is not a bad thing. You just need to take a look at your opening and fix it up a bit. So far we're only on "What is your name". Hold up, Handy Manny. I'm not entirely sure but I don't think how much you've built is a requirement (or a bonus) for becoming a Moderator. Although I suppose it can't hurt...? Actually, I don't know! Can you pull a "Flip This House" and get Moderator?? +1 for section I suppose. +1 again for correctly stating time zone. Amazing how many people trip on this. I MUST ASK: Which version of English? British, American, or... Canadian? Recently discovered there was a bunch of different dialects and now I'm fascinated. WHO? Without a name this personal anecdote sounds made up. Revise for realism, possibly restate to "I like to spend free time helping others remodel and open up Trade Shops." Also: You made a large topic jump without a header. "Helping" isn't on the .Net template anywhere, sir. This looks like you forgot where you were at and just started typing. Add the header back, please. WHOA, easy on groin-punching the current Moderators, sir. This made me legitimately wince in sympathy. You missed another section header. If you're going to go "free form" without any sort of dividers then do it for the whole application. Skipping just a couple makes it look like you simply forgot and felt too lazy to go back and fix it. Add the title question back in, please. This part always gets me more excited than a buzzard at a roadkill rally. Your misplaced apostrophe's are implying you're owning someone's island's! Fix punctuation usage, please. If scamming were legal it would be called BANKING. Fix the indicated use of "there". You meant to say "Thier" and your spell-check didn't catch it sir. Otherwise a very nice little paragraph, +1. Correct the indicated "of cause", you meant to say "of course". Spell check missed it. ALSO: I am suddenly more than a little suspicious. You went from a 12 year old's grammar and sentence structure to something that sounds closer to an adult's job application. Your composition also sounds... really familiar. +1 if this is actually your original writing, sir. Go back over your entire application and make it all sound this professional. CAUGHT YOU. Copied out of Janaa's application. I spend hours reviewing these application posts, WimpoleDavid. I get to know people's grammar, punctuation, phrasing and even word choices; often it is a very good "forum fingerprint". When your tone and style changed so abruptly it made me wonder what happened. Then the word choice of "I Believe" (note the capitalization error) and "for the server to grow immensely" (bad grammar/poor phrasing) felt incredibly familiar. I checked back through some earlier reviews and bam, found it: Janaa. Rewrite this section to remove plagiarized content. Looks good, mostly after-school time. You'll be on when most of the kids are running amok. +1 Do you have any other management or leadership experience? Maybe you're the head of a discussion group, or a tutor at your school, sir? Anything at all that shows you can handle large amounts of tasks would be helpful. Swift, vicious rule enforcement and utterly unbreakable dedication to punishing offenders is the requirement. "Kindness" is a nice thing to have but wholly unnecessary. Non-Donors cannot go to /warp animal, sir. Revise slightly. Copied entirely from Janaa's application, to include the extremely odd punctuation, capitalization and exact order of the commands. I don't see a reason to rewrite this; the content is basically "public domain" and does not enhance (or detract from) your application. At most this is an un-credited source and frowned upon. #SlowYourRoll, player. The schedule you posted above said you were on 2 hours a day, with Wednesday off. Where does this "almost 1 full day almost every day" come from? Rewrite section to match your schedule. This is literally the defining trait of any management position: Telling people what to do. Quite welcome sir, very educational to read. Support Status: 100% (For Janaa's application)
Check out precious accepted mods, and fix Capitol i's. You don't seem up for the job, but if I see you I game I'll make my final judgment. No support for now.
Acutally Hes Some How Managed to get unbanned Oh Did i Mention No Support Reasons Are obvious. More Fuel For the Fire; [WimpoleDavid] Griefing [Lemo] (Denied) | Skyblock Forums Feel Free to Rate This As Rude
