Controversial. A new author relying on swear words sounds immature but an established writer throwing an F-bomb is "colorful". Perception drives the difference.

He told me to use colourful alternatives. It's going to be great for gritty parts. "You moth-ethanol flingflyer, I never should've trusted you".

THAT is... a pretty tame idea of "colorful". Best of luck, sir.

I'm going to have fun with Google Doc's ctrl + f and changing all the swearing so far!

:linkme: Link, please?

I presume you want to see the edited version of the story I have so far?

...no.

#UneditedOrNothing

Unedited:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iHF7_sPgjCib3dm-8U_QzUvaqjm-8J5Xoij7OEcIuS0/edit?usp=sharing
And the edited one, just for fun:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t1bL2dWOqzLYk5h6dhHMN2Uht3ZY0S9YM_ghudJNteo/edit?usp=sharing

•eyebrow• Not amused. Recent work of yours?

By the edited swearing? I'm just going to give that to my teacher and show him how silly it looks.

Definitely looks silly, sir.