Writing Prompt

bentener · Apr 10, 2016

Day One.

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August 6, 2009? When I woke up, Every thing was different. I wasn't in my little old home back on Franklin street, Instead, I was on what seemed like a island? There wasn't much on this place except a few palm trees and small lagoons, But what surprised me the most was a little hut on the edge of this "island". At this time I was still trying to figure out how I got to this place, But i couldn't remember anything at all. After a few more minutes of trying to process this, I finally got up to look around more, When i did so i immediately fell down again, It was just then when I realized my right leg were missing and there was blood around my leg, But it didn't hurt until I noticed it. Threw the pain I tried to crawl to the shelter to see if anything was in there. It took me about 10 minutes to get over to the shelter. The shelter was not huge nor was it small, It was medium size, It had the normal home things, At least I "think" it was the normal home things. It had a stove, couch, windows and a big sized crate right in the middle of it. I thought I better go and look inside of the crate, So I had to crawl even more to look inside the crate. I got over there and i couldn't open it, I struggled for a very long time to open it, And I couldn't do it until i saw a latch. I have no idea why I didn't see it when I first saw it, But apparently I didn't. So, I pulled the latch. A ton of stuff flooded out of the crate. But I didn't care, I was just looking for one thing, Bandages. I scrambled threw all the stuff, Until I saw them. The box was fairly sized, But I still wish the box was a little bigger. So I took off all the packaging, And started putting them on. The box didn't only have band aids, It also had "Insta-Healer", I thought that sounded pretty cool, So, I but it on my leg stub without knowing what it would do. "OUCH!" I yelled. There was a huge pain when i put it on, It felt as if my leg was burning, Like actually burning. When the pain went away, Which felt like for ever. There was no more blood, Or gash in my leg. It was healed? It works as magic! "So, I didn't need a band aid" I muttered under my breath. I was thinking about standing up again. So, I did. This time I could actually stand, (I had good balance of course). I looked around the shelter, Or I should now call it home. Ok, I looked around my home, I could see much more now because I could walk, Or, Hop. I saw a glimpse of the outside. And i decided to look out there again. Right away I saw my trail of blood across the sand. I looked up. I saw... People?! "I thought I was here alone!? I also noticed a jet, A fancy one. After a tiny bit of time trying not to be noticed, One of the people saw me. I was scared and I had hope. "He could either kill me, or help me" I said not even trying to be quiet. Soon all of the people saw me. They started rushing towards me. I tried to hop away but it was no good. They were too fast. When they caught up too me they started punching and kicking me, I couldn't fight back, They were too strong. I fell to the floor, Not knowing what was going to happen next.

Extra: Day 2?

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August 7, 2006? When I woke up? I was underwater, Deep underwater. At that time I didn't even think about breathing or anything, But soon I did, And when I did, I was going crazy. I didn't even know how I got to the top of the water. When I did get to the top, My first breath felt horrible! I dont know why but it did, Something about the air didn't smell right. "That-t mu-st be fro-m me bei-ng underw-ater for alo-ng ti-me?" I sputtered. I was swimming in the water for a while until I saw a island. Was it my island? Well the next moment answered my question. I saw... Them, the people, And that jet. It was then when I saw someone look at me. He looked familiar... "Andrew?!" Yes, He was very familiar, He was my friend. During the time I was trying to figure out this I had a flashback, It was about my friend, I cant remember all of it but I see him pushing someone off of something, I also saw him cut something? Then the flashback went away. And I started to feel sick, Then I passed out... Again.

Day 1o?

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August 17, 2007? I woke up, Screamed, On my island this time. The first thing I though was if I was damaged like last time, I wasn't, But something else was on my body that shouldn't be. A fake leg. That was helpful... I started to walk around the island, This time much faster. I saw my "home" lagoons and the jet, Jet? wait where's the jet?! The jet wasn't there this time, Which was a relief for me, They may kill me, Actually if they were there they would definitely kill me, they couldn't before so they definitely would have. I stopped thinking about this thought not knowing if it was going to jinx it or what, But i'm glad I did. Because something else got me to think. I was getting facial hair, A lot of it! I have no idea what age I am, i don't even know if its normal. It was very funny, I knew a lot of things in some "departments" and very little in others. I was also taller then before. After thinking, I went to the lagoon to wash of, i was indeed dirty. I went over there, Washed off, There was no need to get naked because I was naked, since I was stranded literally IN the ocean. I was washing my hair when I heard a buzzing sound. The JET... I looked up, I couldn't see anything, But a few seconds later I saw it. Yes, It was the jet. "God Dang it!" I Yelled. I was thinking to hide, But I thought "they may find me", Then I thought, "Its better than not hiding". So I went to look for a hiding spot before the jet lands. So I ran as fast as I could. I was faster then I thought I would be. Not the house, that's to obvious. Ok, i decided to go in the lagoon, Even though I had to run all the way back too the lagoon and I sunk my body into the water, Right as the jet landed and a ton of "troops" ran out of the jet. They had guns... That was new. What happened next, I cannot describe, Ill tell you this, It was graphic.

Thanks for reading ill edit more later

Hoecobo · Apr 17, 2016

ayyy I read this short story my freshman year; was pretty good. I could go scrounge up my old essay from it.

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