Mills Moderator Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Mills Me, Feb 21, 2016.

  1. Mills Me
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    Info
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    Hello, so before you see this application, i want to tell you a little bit about me. So to start, my parents are divorced which means that they don't live together. So during the school year (9 months) i am at my dads house, during summer vacation i am at my moms house for (3 months). You may ask if mills is my name, no it is not, there is a reason to mills and i prefer to be called mills. If you know my real name please just call me mills. That is just little about me, but hopefully later on you may get to know me a bit more!

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    Your in-game name

    Mills_

    Which timezone are you in?
    The timezone i am in is Central Standard with dad, but when im at moms, pacific standard.

    Which languages do you speak?
    I speak English, no other language sadly.

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    No, i have never been banned from SkyBlock, i wish to never be banned from this server.

    Why do you think you should be a mod?

    I think I would be a good Moderator, because I wish to make a good character out of me. I also know how to handle situations, and will hopefully learn the commands used to moderate.

    Active:
    I am trying to be more active ever since I returned to forums. For the first time in a while, I have the time to go in game, and help people out. Hopefully you all find my activity to be becoming increasingly more satisfactory.

    Maturity:
    Maturity is a importance in our family, i also know it is important for a Moderator. I know that people wont take a mod as serious as they should if a mod does not act mature, so if a player is breaking the rules that is not as serious, the mod says something, the player will not take him/her as serious. However, if a Moderator comes in game, and is social, yet mature, answers questions that players are asking, and filters through the chat while looking through the gamemode, checking for hackers, then this Moderator is going to be respected as well as listened to.

    Trustworthy:
    And here's the big one. To be called trustworthy, you need to show that you are trustworthy, that you can gain the trust from fellow players. I want to gain the trust from players and staff. I want to be trusted because i know as a moderator, you job it to do your job, not to abuse the job. I wish to be trusted so i can do the job correct and help more and more on the server.

    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    I will put it down each day:
    Mon: 4-6 Hours
    Tues: 4-6 Hours
    Wed: 2-4 Hours
    Thurs: 4-6 Hours
    Fri: 4-9 Hours
    Sat: 4-7 Hours
    Sun: 4-6 Hours
    During travels from dad to moms, i will be off for a day, may get on for a hour but mainly will be off that day to spend time with the family.

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
    I don't have past experience as a moderator on a server before, i wish to gain some experience as a moderator, but i do know the basic commands on how to kick, mute, tempban and ban a player from the server.
     
    Last edited: Feb 21, 2016
  2. Nikoshka
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    Nikoshka Well-Known Member

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    1st :p
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    Application:
    - Is the player's moderator application good?
    It's ok. It needs more detail.
    - What does the player need to add to the application? Maybe add more into the section of why you think you should be a mod. Tell us of how unique you are and WHY you should become a moderator
    - Is the grammar/spelling good in the application? Spelling is good. Grammar is poor. Make sure you capitalize your I's
    - Is the color acceptable in the application? There is no color. Add some. I suggest red for headings and black as text.
    - Anything else? Nope
    Online Activity:
    - Have I seen the player online in-game before?
    I think so. I am not too sure.
    - Does the player help out in-chat often? ^^
    - Have you seen the player engaging on forums? Nope
    - Is the player active on forums? Nope
    - Is the player new to the forums/in-game/forums? New to forums
    - Have you seen the player helping out on forums? Nope
    - Anything Else? Nope
    Player:
    - Is the player mature?
    I am not too sure.
    - Has the player got a bad background? Nope
    - Does this person understand the role of moderating? Maybe in-game but not on forums.
    - Anything Else? Nope

    Support? - 30%
    What you need to do to get my full support:

    - Get used to forums
    - Add color to your mod app
    Good Luck! :p
     
  3. Mills Me
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    Mills Me Member

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    Thanks for your support,

    i will put this into consideration

    Mills~
     
  4. Nikoshka
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    Nikoshka Well-Known Member

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    Don't you mean
    I will put this into consideration

    Also.. Don't put it into consideration...
    Take the advice and use it... not consider it.
     
  5. Fern
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    Fern Well-Known Member

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    Add some more detail to why you think you should be mod. Neutral for now, good luck :)
     
  6. Mills Me
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    Mills Me Member

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    Updated the application.

    Thanks for the feedback, will do some updating.
     
  7. Nikoshka
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    Nikoshka Well-Known Member

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    When I said add color. I didn't mean over do it. Only use 2 colors.
     
  8. Holly
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    Holly Active Member

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    You should write an introduction and just put a link for it.

    Just put English.

    Just put no.

    You have comma spliced. Please fix the punctuation here. Also we will know how active you are in the 'how active can you be everyday' section. Hence this is irrelevant.

    Again, the reader will know how "mature" you are by the way you act and speak to others. Honestly, it looks like you just listed briefly what a moderator does and "maturely" said 'i' instead of 'I'. Not only that but you comma spliced and just said maturity is important. You need to state how YOU are mature.

    You never start a sentence with 'and'. The word 'and' is a conjunction which connects two sentences together. The punctuation here is atrocious and needs to be fixed. Secondly, this sentence makes no sense and is similar to that of a 10 year old.

    Overall you need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. Your application is also quite repetitive throughout and you need to state more reasons on why you think you should be a moderator. Lastly you need to stop saying 'i' and say 'I' because this just makes you look immature. No support. Good luck though.
     
    Last edited: Feb 21, 2016
  9. Holly
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    Holly Active Member

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    Don't use any colours at all. It is just stupid.
     
  10. BriPlaysMC
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    Partial Support

    PROS:
    ~Mature
    ~lot of potential
    CONS:
    ~New to forums
    ~Needs more information

    Good Luck!
     
  11. Mills Me
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    Mills Me Member

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    Thanks for the support
     
  12. poggers
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    poggers Senior Member

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    Support.
     
  13. Tribal
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    Tribal Senior Member

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    Partial Support - Try not to make your sentences so repetitive and I suggest you get a little more experienced with the forums before you create an app.
     
  14. Agent
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    Agent not really an agent Premium

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    Neutral. Reasons stated above :D
     
  15. Stel
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    No support sorry.
     

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