Hi everyone, my dream is to be a full time youtuber one day and this is the start of my journey. Hopefully my effort and edits showed my hard work because this took me weeks to record and edit. If everyone can like and sub that would be amazing. Thank you everyone and have a great day
Hey Dionnnn, I'm no expert and I respect your hard work BUT I have some advice for you * 1) Your mic is bad and it makes for a bad viewing experience. I would really like smoother audio for narration. * 2) The script is fairly bland, it's not awful and it is acceptable, but it doesn't excite me and it's just meh. 3) I found the subtitles to be fairly annoying, they would be great for key points of the script. They take up a lot of space and they really aren't that needed. 4) This kinda goes back to the script point but stuff is happening that I don't really understand. You assume we know you in the script, but we don't, and you are randomly teleporting around n such. 5) imo a lot of content that you've cut out (at least im assuming you cut out exploration and fighting pokemon) has made the video overall worse. I would like to see at least a little of that as it's the main thing you do, at the very least a sped up montage. 6) You go from having a weak team to a strong team in like 1 minute without showing any footage as to how? 7) Advertising pixelmon videos here is irrelevant and won't get you the audience you need for this type of content. I feel to truly understand your video in the current form you need some knowledge of pixelmon, and most people here don't have that. Your video advertising in this community comes off as spam... Overall your video isn't awful, and I can see you have some good skills at editing and video making. I'll give this video a 3/10, but with your video skills you could one day make some 5/10 videos that are watchable. Good luck man!
To be such a small creator, I really love the effort put into the video. I believe the editing is good, like you got a lot going on which is great for preventing people from quitting instantly. Keep it up
