Alajoshi's mod application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Alajoshi, Apr 9, 2015.

  1. Alajoshi
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    Alajoshi Member

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    Alajoshi,
    timezone:Brisbane,Australia.
    languages: English.
    I have never been banned.
    I think i should be a mod because i enjoy helping people and have a happy atitude about it.
    I will most likely be able to be on about 3-4 hours a day unless im away from home.
    I do not have any past experience but did have a friend on another sever that was a mod.
     
  2. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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    No Support, This is so short and so un detailed. Also use Bold and Underline. Use Colour too! 'Brisbane Australia is NOT a Timezone! You need so much more detail in your application. Check out others applications and rewrite your application. GL xD
     
  3. tallyhall
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    tallyhall Active Member

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    I read your application and these are the errors I found:

    1. Lots of spelling and grammatical errors.
    2. Add way more detail to the "Why I want to be a mod" section.
    3. Create a specific schedule that the administrative can see, like this:
    Monday~ 10:00 AM-8:00 PM
    Tuesday~ 10:00 AM-7:30 PM

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    lso Brisbane is not a Timezone, it is a city. Please fix that, there are 3 different time zones in Australia.

    No support so far. Hope to see this changed.

    ~WolfytheAwesome :heart:
     
  4. Alajoshi
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    Alajoshi Member

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    Thanks for the feed back!
    I was quite tired when i wrote this =(
    I will be looking at re-writing it soon
     
  5. TheSugarCane
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    No support.
    • The title needs to look something like this: [Aus] [Alajoshi] [Net]
    • Never seen you online, therefore never seen you help out, although timezones could be to blame
    • Add in the titles
    • Add way more detail
    • Add actual times that you can be online, for example: Monday: 4pm-8pm
    • You're new to the forums, get to know the community on here before you make a mod application
    • Correct your grammar. Change "i" to "I" for example
    • Give us a paragraph with some information about yourself, at the moment we don't know anything about you
    Good luck.
     
  6. Alajoshi
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    Alajoshi Member

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    Thank you!
    I will be re-posting a application in around a months time,
    and yes SugarCane timezones definetly could be to blame for you not seeing me.
    I only recenlty joined the forums but have been playing on the server for arround 2 years.
     

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