[UK] Mod Application .Net RyanMcgill98

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  1. ryan mcgill
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    ryan mcgill Member

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    Your in-game name:
    My game name is ryanmcgill98 message me if you need any help

    Which timezone are you in?
    Greenwich Mean Time Zone (UTC+00:00) but i play all night

    Which languages do you speak?
    I speak clear English with a excellent vocabulary and usage of words

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Yes sadly for 15 minutes, I was on a server using cobble jumping to get higher so i can see the awesome work as he was away from keyboard.

    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    I should be mod because i have good friendly attitude, I am very generous to other players and want everyone to enjoy this server that little more. I like to interact with
    players and listen generously. I like to solve problems as quick as possible to keep users happy and help them with any need. This ranges from questions for example how do i
    earn grass?. This server is very friendly and has alot of players on a daily basis. I play in large hour chunks (5 hours+). So with alot of members you will need some
    friendly Mods. I never leave anyone out when it comes to problems or questions. In some cases i will go out of my own way to help them on their own island, for example mining cobblestone. Some people play alone and need a friend i like to think to myself im that friend. I've been playing a lot more and getting to know more people on the forums and servers but im still hearing '' They are no mods online when i need one'' ''Where are mods when i need them''. I would like to help them but i don't have to correct powers. I've helped new comers when i see them type in chat and i feel a better person afterwards. Being a moderator i can help people 24/7 i want to . Its my hobby knowing i can help people i would play for bigger hours and longer. Im and understanding person who like to hear everyone's part in story. i think outside the box and thrive on peoples happiness. In reply to the photos i attached i was shocked when they are no moderators online. I feel sorry for the guy cause he could of been in trouble. I know as a Mod, others people's requirements come before mine. I treat all people the same wether they are donor, skygod , or a green, i know its hard to be herd when there's a lot of spam so i will try and reduce spam as much as i can. I am a really experienced player on minecraft i have played it through all platforms for over 4 years so i know the do's and dont of any server. i am a fast typer so i can reply to people needing my help instant giving them the help they DESERVE. In my opinion many people from many ages play minecraft so i respect everyone regardless of gender or age. if i catch someone spamming i will mute them for 15min if they break it then it will double. i have strict discipline on people who dont follow the rules because the rules make the server run smoothly. i am a responsible young adult so i will not abuse the server commands and not show off, im here to help and thats my role to help. i know i have a lot of free time for a moderator because i work 2 days a week so i have 5 full days and 2 half days dedicated to this server. Yes i am new but everyone starts somewhere and im going to get better and better and more known. im 17 years of age so im very positive,modest, truthful, sensible. Once i set my heart to something im never going to stop until i reach it. My heart is going into this server. I want to influence more people to be the same, to enjoy the server and dont take it for granted by breaking rules.

    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    I play in great chunks like 5 hours and above . Mostly all day with a small amount of 10 minute breaks

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
    I have been a moderator on many other games but not minecraft. It will be a good change and a good experience. I have learned all the commands to be a moderator and im constantly learning more and more everyday.

    Ending paragraph:
    Thank you for reading my post i hope you all enjoyed reading. if you see any faults please do correct me as i learn from mistakes. I hope to see you again both in forums and
    in the server, Have a nice day :).
     
    Last edited: Aug 4, 2015
  2. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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    No Support,
    • Needs more detail
    • Use Bold and Underline
    • Use darker Colours (Optional)
    • Space your application out a bit more
    • Never seen you online (Timezones maybe)
    • Never seen you on the forums (Timezones maybe)
    Good Luck!
     
  3. Nocturnish
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    Nocturnish Senior Member

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    Alright, hey there! I've seen you a lot on forums posting "If you need any help msg me". You're gonna need a lot more than that buddy. Try actually helping others instead of just saying it. I know you're trying to help but just do it? :) This application has a few minor grammatical errors. Try capitalizing your I's as it looks professional in applications. Also, I've never seen you in-game (considering we have different time zones). Get a little experience more on the server and forums until you're ready. For now, you're not so ready. Those are my only criticisms.

    Good luck! :)
     
  4. Ghasklin | LewLew
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    Ghasklin | LewLew Active Member

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    I see your writing has been enlarged I suggest adding more detail.
     
  5. Pizza
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    Pizza Experienced Member

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    There are a lot of extra things you put that don't really help your application. I'd suggest fixing your multiple grammar errors and taking out anything that is irrelevant.
     
  6. JulioJones
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    JulioJones Well-Known Member

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    I personally don't care about how applications look just what's in them. I like your app, but from a personal experience where you scammed me ( I still have video ) I cannot support. In my opinion neither should anyone else.

    No support.
     
  7. Crystal
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    Crystal Experienced Member

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    No Support,
    -Your font is big, try to make it smaller.
    -Add some more detail.
    -Bold or underline some important information.
    -I see you online, however I don't see you helping.
    Good Luck
     
  8. Chiyami
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    Chiyami Experienced Member

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    #NoSupport

    ~You murdered my eyes with the grammar and spelling
    ~Capitalize the 'I's
    ~Text too big
    ~The colours are way too bright
    ~Use bold/italics/underline to make it stand out a lil more
    ~Space it out more, no wall-o-text plz
    ~More info&detail
    ~Don't see you online/helping (timezones maybe)


    #Gl
     
  9. NotoriousShark
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    NotoriousShark Active Member

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    no support yet.
    -You're patially active on forums, maybe get your activity up a little bit.
    -I don't see you helping online (timezones?)
    -Text is a bit large.
    -A bit more detail would be good.

    goodluck!
     
  10. LivingShadow
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    LivingShadow Experienced Member

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    No Support.
    Fix your grammar.
    Don't make the words bigger.
    Add paragraphs, so it would be easier to read.
    Add more details.
    Good Luck Though. :)
     

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