Creepypasta One Sentence At a Time

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    Hello. We are going to write a creepypasta. Only post once a day, and don't double post. Double posting means posting twice in a row. Try to do one sentence at a time but if you have to for it to make sense, you can do two. Try to actually make it creepy, and don't post random things that completely mess up the story or don't make sense. This creepypasta will be in first person and past-tense.
    Who shall start?
     
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    The midnight sky hung over the darkening Earth, making it seem as if a huge claw took ahold of the planet.

    Idk >.>
     
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    I had just gotten in a big argument with my parents, and I had run away, alone into the cold dark streets.
     
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    The gravel path following the road crunched under my feet, as I mournfully crept down the streets, more regret with each step.
     
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    Excuse me for posting twice.
    The night air was chilling, and it felt as if someone was breathing behind me, causing the ends of the hairs on my neck to stand one end.
     
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    I glanced around the dark alleyways, as the street lights flickered dimly.
     
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    Oops aCcident :/
     
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    Why did everyone rate that rude...
     
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    Suddenly I heard a branch snap
    It was random, it made no sense, and it messed up the story. Just ignore it. Now lettuce continue the creepy pasta.
     
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    My breathing intensified at the thought of someone or something following me.
     
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    I looked for something that could have the effect of a mirror, allowing me to see what or who was behind me.
     
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    My hands searched my pockets, and my fingers found the cool handle of a pocket knife.
    Ozapenguin
    Can I have a special privilege and post more than once?
     
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    Yes
     
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    Thank you cx
     
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    Someone was in the distance and was coming towards me. I was so scared.
     
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    The midnight sky hung over the darkening Earth, making it seem as if a huge claw took ahold of the planet.
    I had just gotten in a big argument with my parents, and I had run away, alone into the cold dark streets.
    The gravel path following the road crunched under my feet, as I mournfully crept down the streets, more regret with each step.
    The night air was chilling, and it felt as if someone was breathing behind me, causing the ends of the hairs on my neck to stand one end.
    I glanced around the dark alleyways, as the street lights flickered dimly.
    Suddenly I heard a branch snap.
    My breathing intensified at the thought of someone or something following me.
    I looked for something that could have the effect of a mirror, allowing me to see what or who was behind me.
    My hands searched my pockets, and my fingers found the cool handle of a pocket knife.
    Someone was in the distance and was coming towards me. I was so scared.
     
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    This ruins the mysteriousness of it .-. Js
    It just doesn't fit in.
    Edit: just my personal opinion, im sry D:
     
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    I agree, it wasn't very descriptive and it ruins the mysteriousness, but we are just going to have to make it work.
    I will continue this later.
     
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    I had a strange feeling about the figure. He was wearing a black cloak.
     

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