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  1. Sean
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    Get wrecked with click-bait*

    As some of you know I have recently started making music, I uploaded my very first song 12 days ago, and it didn't hit massive amounts of plays due to the nature of genre, it already has a very small following + I don't throw it in peoples faces, and while in time it'll collect views I want feedback, something you don't get on Soundcloud. I can get it here though! Of course that's life and I do it for fun and because making beats from nothing and losing myself in them puts a smile on my face; as it's weird for me to listen to my own music, I ask some others.

    If you do click the link be sure to lower your volume, I mean it, this isn't softcore music, it's hard and it's loud and if you're not ready for it it'll hurt your ears. basically I just need people to tell me what's wrong with the songs etc so I can improve in the future. IE missing bass, too much bass (not possible but you get the idea).
    Here's a link to the song: "Here's Some Mackerel! Eat it. by ModernDayWeeaboo - Hear the world’s sounds"
    And here's a link to my other songs: "ModernDayWeeaboo's profile - Hear the world’s sounds" - some have swearing in the titles. So, sorry for that.

    *I'll possibly give away my kits on .NET to the person who helps the most, at this point it isn't much as I give it to greenies most often enough. But free stuff is free stuff.

    Thank you bless.
     
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    Please explain to me what you intended to make when you made F*** my ears softly.
     
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    It was a sped up version of my first track, that's it. Someone requested it, imo it came out a little better.
     
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    I like it :D
     
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    i like this
     
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    The noise in the song is a bit to overpowering even for the genre your wanting. The beat is really hard to find and therefore makes the song very hard to follow. Also the noise on most of your songs comes out badly on the average pair of earbuds and headphones recommend maybe change the noise to something a bit less buzzy and a bit softer. Also make the lyrics of your song a bit louder as that seems to be something people enjoy. Maybe also add more rythmic sounds to the song instead of that one noise as on your #sorrymeghan it would be nice if it wasn't just that one noise on that rythm.
    Also what music program you using I've been trying my luck at a little electro genre :)
     
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    Thanks for the feedback! I cannot hear how it comes out due to the fact my headset is really high-quality in terms of sound and audio. is the audio cracking or what? It was perfect when I was making it, so I'm not sure! As for the beat it's meant to be a mess, I'm finally learning how to combine better sounds so it flows better. :)
     
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    ah its not cracking or anything when its playing it just comes out sorta dull almost blurry if we were talking in terms of it being vision. Listening to your songs you might be going more for this genre for most of that song they just have a couple of alternating sounds, but the noise is spaced out and has a pretty nice echo. If you want more suggestions I'm sure the mineverse community can help they love your genre type :)
     
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    The Mineverse community hates me.

    I was aiming for this genre.


    Of course, as you can tell it's naturally heavy, a mess. Of course when I made my first few songs I was still learning with no guides, going up to the newer stuff I expanded with more beats. Progress is being made.
     
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    with that type of music your right on then :)
     
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    I'm currently kinda moving into hard trance, but yeah, eventually I wanna make some other stuff. :p
     
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