Wanna give me constructive criticism?

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  1. Gemmalove
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    So some of you may know, I like to sing.
    I also don't take voice lessons or any of that.
    So I'm gonna post a vocaroo here, and could you guys give me criticism, please and thank you :heart:
    I don't want reasonless "you suck" though.
    More like, "you suck, you should.... to be better"
    Thanks again :>

    I may post more songs, I don't know.
    Vocaroo | Voice message
     
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    Gud :>
     
  3. TimePlaysGames
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    Didn't know Ed Sheeren sang that
     
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    That voice :O I LUUUUV it :) :heart:
    Maybe dont be nervous, cuz u dont have to :) (its a bit trilling)
     
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    Very very good, well done!
     
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    You're a very good singer :)
     
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    Trilling?
    okay :p
    Although I have a pretty deep voice.
     
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    Deep voice i wish i could sing like that you are awesome
     
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    Heh heh i dont mean trilling, but ya know, when some1 is nervous their voice is gonna ... Idk what thats called :p
     
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    yeah I was a bit nervous.
    I get what you mean :heart:
     
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    I love this song, you have a gorgeous voice \ (•◡•) /
     
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    Still dont have to be nervous though :) ur voice is FANTASTIC :heart:
     
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    I think I'm in love...:stoned:

    (With your voice of course xD)
     
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    I was thinking the same
    Then I saw the second bit and was like oh :t
     
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    And yeah PLEASE post more songs :heart:
     
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    Brah? U even take singing lessons brah?


    Seriously, if you don't you should.
     
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    Your diction and breath control was really good. You have a lot of talent, haha. The only constructive criticism I would give you is try not to strain your voice so much on the low parts. If you went up a pitch or so on those really low parts, it would sound pretty flawless imo. Good job. :)
     
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    You have such a beautiful voice, I don't know why you're so nervous about it, the only criticism I could give is to the people that say you suck at singing, that was great :)
     
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    I must admit I wasn't expecting this to be good. But it was.
    I only have 2 criticisms. Number one is your lows seem a bit weak, those could use some work. For example, "strange men" at 34 seconds in.
    The other is that you can kind of hear the nerves in your voice. You're holding back, so at times you sound a little bit monotone. Confidence is key. Cheers.
     
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    There are 2 or 3 places where the song went too low for my voice, I know that. I'll work on strengthening that. Thanks :)
     
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