[USA] SkylarCupcakez's Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by SkylarCupcakez, Aug 29, 2014.

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Is this a good app?

  1. Yes

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  2. Sort of

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  3. Not At all

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  1. SkylarCupcakez
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    Your in-game name: SkylarCupcakez

    Which timezone are you in? US Eastern.

    Which languages do you speak? English, and a tiny bit of Spanish

    A bit about me: I am a student in the USA. I love playing games, singing, and making art. I am a teen, and I like helping other people on Minecraft in ways such as answering questions, repairing items, and helping fix griefed islands.

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?) No.

    Why do you think you should be a mod? I love helping others. I am a strong leader and great problem solver. I want to be someone people look up to, a strong leader, someone at the top of the pack, telling people what to do if something goes wrong, fixing things, and also giving help. I am a calm, patient person most of the time. Sometimes, I can be strict, but in a kind way. I am a happy person, even when life brings me down. I always look at the bright side of things, like mistakes. "Even mistakes can be wonderful." - Robin Williams

    How long can you be active on the server every day? About 1 or 2 hours on weekdays, and about 3-4 on weekends.

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator? No, but I help many people in real life.

    Please give suggestions on what I should add. Thank you for reading. :)
     
    Last edited: Aug 30, 2014
  2. camy1238
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    Add more detail. We really want to know about why you think you should be a mod! Be expressive. I'll leave you with 25% support for now until you add more detail! :D good luck
     
  3. SkylarCupcakez
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    Put more details. Thank you for reading :D
     
  4. Archeopstoms
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    Mkay. Sorry, but that is barely anything. Also, look up your timezone of where you live. That's the easiest. You also need to include a lot more detail about yourself. That had almost no detail. I'm sorry, but take a look into other peoples moderator apps with lots of views. They would take up about 50-75 lines of space, possibly even more. For most of the important info they put atleast 10 lines. Sorry, but all you did was:

    "Why should I be a mod" I love helping others. I am a strong leader and great problem solver. I want to be someone people look up to, a strong leader, someone at the top of the pack, telling people what to do if something goes wrong, fixing things, and also giving help. I am a calm, patient person most of the time. Sometimes, I can be strict, but in a kind way. I am a happy person, even when life brings me down. I always look at the bright side of things, like mistakes.

    That's great, but that has barely any information about why you should be a mod. And how do all the mods and players know you're gonna do this? (Not saying that you'd be a bad mod, don't get me wrong) but moderators and other people need to see you helping out ingame so they will support you and will trust you. Also, you need to include a lot more information about why you should be a mod, and all the other things in there. Also, include some things about yourself, so people get to know your personality. Also, other good mod apps have more than 50-65 lines of space Put some stuff in bold, or colour maybe! Other mods need to see if you help out people otherwise there is no point.

    If you really want mod that badly you're gonna have to
    A: Help out people a lot in-game
    B: Don't make a mod app strait away
    C: Include a lot of detail in your next app
    D: there are other things but you should find them out yourself

    I'm sorry, but that wasn't even near the standards of a regular app. Also, please don't take this and a criticism, I'm trying to help you get any chance of mod, so read this, and look at other mod apps (with lots of views) and help out in-game and you should be on the right track. Tip:
    Maybe you should get involved in the forums more so people get to know you and will help you out!

    You also have barely been on the forums and making an app is not just gonna get you promoted, it takes a long time. And making an app doesn't necessarily mean you will become a moderator.

    There are multiple other things you need to do but I'll let you find other things because then you did the good work, not me.

    Hope you don't take this as a criticism.

    Hope this helped!

    - Archeopstoms
     
  5. SkylarCupcakez
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    Thank you so much! I will take your advice by helping more people, think about what im writing and not just go write whatever comes to my head, include LOTS more details, and be on the forums more often. I do not take it as criticism, but lots of help. I will try harder to make a more detailed, organized, and well-written app next time. Maybe in a few months ill make another, maybe years if I still like the server as much as I do now. For now, ill just be a helpful citizen.
     
  6. Archeopstoms
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    You're already on the right track :>
     

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