A mini story :D

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    Inspired by Pinkydrew3's thread and 100101. And Archeopstoms you know what I'm talking about!
    Written in first person by the way. This is about a server i play (the story) i will delete this thread if it leaks out too much information. Mods pm me about this thanks.

    Part one was made on the 4th August for us Australians

    The story of Chris


    I was playing the com on minecraft clicking away here and there while talking to my friend Lucas. I was playing a pvp server which involved something similar to the walls. It was raining outside, the perfect time for my carnivorous plants which had recently run out of rain water. The news was on and all I could hear above the cackle of lightning were the following words, storm up ahead evacuate! I ignored the warning and continued to play little did i know what was about to happen.

    Dark clouds brewed in the east gathering slowly while gradually floating towards my house. I hadn't noticed at the time but the lightning strikes were closer each time the storm moved forward by several metres. It was too late by the time the lightning struck my house i was still on the computer. The electricity coursed through the wires which spread out like pitchforks throughout my house one of them connected to my computer. All I could hear and feel was fizzes and intense pain. Suddenly my vision began to waver until all at once it swirled in a spiral like a whirlpool. Lucas was shouting at me on Skype maybe it was happening to him too. I was dizzy. I was scared. I didn't know what to do. I closed my eyes to block out everything in that precise moment.

    Soon the sensation stopped and i opened my eyes, blinked twice before moving my arm. Where am i, I gasped as I could hear the little clicks repeatedly clicking on my arm. Hmmm what's that noise i wondered before looking down, how wrong i was to have ignored that radio warning. I was in the world of minecraft. I could see many players just like me except each skin was different i saw steves, herobrines, notch, Noobcrew, cypriotmerks and much much more. Then a loud voice boomed throughout the lobby, Maze Runner will begin in 5 seconds. Were these players just like me?

    To be continued (depends if you guys like it of course!)

    Part two (couldn't help myself xD)
    Made on the 4th August

    I spawned in an enclosed area Lucas was right behind me we were on the team Aqua. The skype call had ended.... I had never played this server before but was described to it by another friend i told Lucas about it and we decided to play tonight but this incident occurred and we were fighting for our lives! I looked in my supply crate which had 8 cobble, seeds and one pig egg. I ran to the small out crop of trees and began wood cutting. I was armed with 3 decoy chests which i could place down. These chests exploded on contact when opened. I also had permanent night vision. It was night and was already turning to daylight. I crafted stone swords for the team and dispersed each one to a member.

    Then I saw her oh how her hair flowed in the wind her golden eyes gleamed in the sunlight. Her clothes were silky and beautiful she stood there looking out into space. She was the princess AKA a villager lol! She stood there and grunted. Her health bar and hunger was shown in a book in my inventory. It stated keep your princess alive unless you welcome death. I looked up my friends were gone. I had not noticed the slight tremors and rumbling sounds which had erupted from the ground while reading the help book. Each wall in my enclosed barrier had a small opening which led into a dark and forbidding maze. What was i going to do....

    Part three
    Made on 5th August

    I had already received wood from Lucas who dropped 4 planks before speeding away. I looked at the crafting table... I thought better make a wood sword before going inside the maze before i ran. After crafting a weak weapon i raced in after Lucas, where was he?!?! Help help help!!! I better help that player i thought but when I turned the corner all i could see was a flash of red and grey before someone crashed into me... OOF wtf are you doing an Aqua player shouted before toppling over.

    I couldn't mourn for him as the player behind him surged forward targeting me. He was armed with a stone sword and a golden chestplate i would have stood no chance but he was limping slowly. I picked up the other Aqua player's stone sword in my left hand before switching my wood and stone swords to different hands. The player who i soon realized as Purple looked puzzled and was like Huh??? Before i struck. I took him by surprise and my new enhanced stony weapon grazed his right arm. Yes i thought i had gotten his sword hand. Little did i know what was in store for me.

    He still continued to fight even with a right hand gushing with blood. He laughed his head off when i finally flung his sword away back into the corner. He drew out another one this time with his left hand. And said to me you should have run bet ya didn't know i am left- handed right? Well here we go. With my back up against the wall, my eyes searched frantically for yet another escape route.

    Part 4
    Made on 5th August

    I looked into his pupils his eyes were red with hate and they bore into my nearly black pupils. My eyes darted away up the mossy cobblestone walls covered in vines. I could tell he was confident too confident in fact but what he didn't know was that to win this game you have to use your head. My motto is Know the maze, play with the maze own the maze. I already knew about it in that last 7 minutes with my photophobic memory i jumped on the vines like a monkey in the trees heaving my body with one hand the other blocking the incoming sword movements from below. I had played other servers in which you got to pick kits like archer, warrior and assassin kinda like mob arena if you know what i mean.

    I perched up there like a little bird on a branch looking down at a cat. I leaped from above and landed behind him, he was confused now i now knew that i had a few seconds to attack or run but knowing that my arm was level to his chestplate i would only dent my sword maybe even snap it. So i ran and ran as fast as I could since i was a mapper i could find my base with the compass in my hand. It was sunset knowing Lucas he would be back equipped with OP weapons and armour.

    The sun was falling and i had to remember the advice Lucas told when it becomes night!?!? Oh yes that's right he said something about greivers and the walls closing. I turned the corner hoping i wouldn't get a dead end. The cyan woollen walls loomed ahead of me but as i surged forward i could here a deep rumbling sound. Uh oh the walls are closing i was halfway through when I was forced to walk then i could only shuffle damn damn damn!!! Lucas help pull me out i shouted. He arrived by my side grasped my hand and pulled me out of the walls. I heard an OOF as the attacker that had slaughtered the other Aqua player crashed into the walls a few seconds behind.

    And that was when the shrieking began all at once. I could see other name tags now except they looked like common names such as Slayer, warrior, names people would call themselves except they were called Greivers not Greifers but Greivers. All i could hear was a slashing sound as they scuttled and walked towards the doors trying to barge through. Lucas was muttering that player is good as dead no one stands a chance against a Greiver. All i could do was watch all i could hope for was i was the only one playing the game for real. I wished no one was really playing the game for their lives just me. But then Lucas asked me 'are you stuck in this game as well like sucked in?'

    For the final part of the story which is like part 20 idk should i do battle against the Greiver boss or the last team. P.S Greiver boss is a giant zombie XD!
     
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    I'm forcing a part 2, absolutely :t
     
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    I will try to do a part each day like a mini series :D but I have to go to bed now i got debating tomorrow :(
     
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    Added part two.
     
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    do part 3! i love books!
     
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    part 3 do it!
     
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    Ok I'm doing it now!
     
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    YAY, FINALLY, PART 3!
     
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    I love cliff hanging!
     
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