My new and approved application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Fishy1450, Jul 15, 2014.

  1. Fishy1450
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    Your in-game name:My in game name is Fishy1450.I am a very fair person with a strong feeling of justice. If I were mod I would spend enough time on each conflict between players to make sure the right person got in trouble. I would also try to make sure everybody who needed my help got helped, and the bad people on the server, like the griefers, were banned and taken care of. I have helped resolve conflicts between people before, and made sure things stayed peaceful around the server.
    Which timezone are you in?Eastern Standered time
    Which languages do you speak?engilish only.
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)no
    Why do you think you should be a mod?I think I should be a mod because I'm nice and I'm determined to help people get over the past make more friends.
    How long can you be active on the server every day?3-4 hours
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?yes
     
  2. Woozle
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    Hey,

    So, a few pointers.

    First, you really need to expand on your application; more than just one word answers. You do not need to go into describing what being kind, helpful, and friendly means to you (as some people might suggest), but do go into some detail explaining where your past experience as a moderator comes from and things like that. Expand on your answers.

    Secondly, spelling, grammar, and punctuation are important. Your title is the reason I came here. It makes me want to ask you, "Who approved your application?" Instead, maybe it should be, "My new and Improved Application?" There are also a few other mistakes in your app, but you can find those. While nobody is perfect 100% of the time, do make an attempt to be perfect in your mod application. It serves you well when people try to assess your maturity level and it makes your app more appealing in general.

    Lastly, break it up a little bit. Rather than being one giant block of text, maybe add some spaces, or bold the questions so they stand out from the answers. Maybe add some color, but do be conservative because too much of a good thing can be bad.

    Anyways, expand and improve and you might gain the support of myself and others. See you in-game!

    -Wooz
     
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  3. ToxicWaste
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    I agree with Woozle this application needs a bit more time into it sorry but for now no support
     
  4. Gemmalove
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    Hi there.
    I'm afraid I can't support for the following reasons.
    1) We're in the same timezone and I have NEVER seen you helping.
    2) The spelling in this is far from perfect. You need to spellcheck and edit the misspellings (Standered, Engilish, etc.), including the one in the title. This application hasn't been approved, only "improved"
    3) You need to add a LOT more detail.
    4) You need to make this more interesting, by adding color, formatting, and other things to make it unique :p
    5) You aren't active on the forums.
    6) You need to tell more about your past moderator experience.

    It might help to check out some popular or accepted applications to see what you want yours to look like. Don't copy though.
     
  5. Jennie
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    Jennie Senior Member

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    No support, I've never seen you helping in the chat, Your app needs more detail also a thorough spell check.
     

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