[UK] Oxford_Zombie's Mod Application

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  1. Oxford_Zombie
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    Thanks Green! Could you tell me what I could do to improve?
     
    Oxford_Zombie, Jul 10, 2014
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    Maybe a little more detail and bold your headings do they stand out
     
    Wonkie, Jul 10, 2014
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    It looks like each word is a sentence since you capitalized every single one, it also hurts my eyes, maybe you should just stick will regular words.
     
    xXhardytyXx, Jul 10, 2014
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    Hi xxhardytxx. After I saw your post, I went to my app and read it for the capital letters you mentioned. Yes, I do use capitals, but only when appropriate. Thanks

    Hi green, could you please tell me which section I could add detail in? Thanks
     
    Oxford_Zombie, Jul 11, 2014
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    You need more detail in you're app, like a lot c: add a lot of detail and let you're personality show...
     
    AmazingGraceGirl, Jul 11, 2014
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    Support Nice app!
     
    Ogrefyy, Sep 28, 2014
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