Moderator application for $100 donor

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by zspy1114, Dec 30, 2013.

  1. zspy1114
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    Hello, my in-game name is zspy1114! I am 12 years old and live in the Pacific timezone. I live in the U.S .of A. I mainly speak English but know a small amount of Spanish. I have been banned only once but for something I didn't do. Either way I have learned my lesson from that experience and haven't been banned yet. I think I should be a mod because I want to see people be happy. My best friend got bullied because of his religion. I then spent two hours on his server making his dream house. He still doesn't know who made it but he's very happy :)). I'm helpful, loyal, friendly, and devoted to my job. I can be active about an hour to three hours because I am busy at school. I have played on this server for about a year. Have been a Moderator on the server PopcornPVP which has just shutdown :baw. That's all!


    ~~zspy1114~~
     
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    I'd space out the application, divide it into sections showing each question and your answer to make it easier to navigate and discern between your answers to each question.

    Also, please don't mention your donation in your application, it will lower your chances.
     
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    oh lol. So do I send it again?
     
  4. DonkeyKing1623
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    No just edit the application and use the correct formatting.
     
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    ok DonkeyKing
     
  6. Archeopstoms
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    :facepalm: Sorry, but that isn't really an application. You just said a bunch of stuff and by the looks of things you didn't read the rules for apps and didn't read the template. You need to
    A: Read the rules e.g. You do NOT, no matter what the circumstances mention donor in your application. It makes you sound like "oh, I am a donor so i should be a mod". That may not be the case but that's what it is most of the time.
    B: go to the template and "COPY" it and then come here, edit your current app (delete everything from it) and then "PASTE" the template and fill it out
    C: Include some colours! Or make something bold. Make it look appealing and make sure you don't have bad grammar, punctuation or spelling. Also, don't have super long exceeding sentences that become boring to read.
    D: Also, that needs A LOT more information. Most good mod apps are like 59 lines long. Go check some out, too.

    [READ] If you really want mod, you gotta try. Even though you say that you help out (which I believe you do according to your app), the other mods or other people need to see that you help out otherwise you might just be saying you do, but you don't. Also,
     
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    Got to go ill edit it later sorry
     
  8. Ghasklin | LewLew
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    This isn't an app i really don't think u will get the application please don't take this comment offensively and please don't put donor on your title.
     

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