Hello there, MrBenCraft!
Please forgive me if I offend you in any way in writing this review kind of thing. I never normally do this but I thought that you need some help so, your help is here!
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Grammar Mistake Alert! You have missed some commas. This should be ''Hello, everybody, I am MrBenCraft!''.

Grammar Mistake Alert! This should be ''and I've made new friends ''.

Spelling Mistake Alert! This should be ''MrBxn, however, I do have ALT's that I use a lot but MrBxn is my main account that I am applying for.'.

I don't think that this is needed.

Missing Word Alert! This should be ''not sure what that is for the US or other countries''.

Missing Bracket Alert! You have missed a bracket at the end; this should look like ''(I started playing skyblock whilst travelling so I'm very thankful my parents took me and my two sisters out travelling).''.

Missing Punctuation Alert! This should be ''Well, I speak English fluently but I am soon going to be taking a GCSE (hopefully) in French and Spanish so I know a bit of both.''. Also, could you write down a sentence or two in French and Spanish, just so we know you can speak/type it?

Missing Punctuation/Capital Letters Alert! This should be ''On Skyblock forums and Skyblock.net, I am very, very active. I am sometimes a bit too active, as well, for my parents liking.'' I don't understand the sentence but you missed a comma and a full stop; it should look like ''From 1-10 activity on forums, I'm a 1o.''. Plus, the rest of it should look like ''As for school, I'm at school for 10-12 hours a day but I will only be on for 30-60 minutes a day (If I want to get a decent night sleep).''. Remove the ''which is sad but Cyp this is ok :3'' as it is not necessary.

Missing Capital Letters/Wrong Spelling Alert! You have spelt ''cought'' wrong, it should be ''caught''. Furthermore, when you have missing capital letters when you have typed 'i' which should be 'I'

Wrong Use Of Comma/Missing Word/Wrong Word Alert! When you've written ''patient,'', you do not need the comma so I'd remove that. Plus, when you write ''how'' it should be ''how to''. And, when you write ''vie'', I don't think that this is a word and I think you meant ''via''.

Missing Capital Letters Alert! On these two sentences, above, you have written ''i'' whereas it should be a capital letter, ''I''

Missing Capital Letters Alert! You have used ''i'' three times whereas it should be ''I''.

*You should stick to two colours, one for the subtitles and one for the explaining part.
*I also think that you shouldn't use the bright colours.
*I never really see you in-game. Possibly timezones?
*I never really see you in forums as well.

Again, I am sorry if this offended you in any way but it had to be done some day. Plus, I am just looking out for you.
Good Luck!​

Support Status:
No Support!​