this is a little mini story i put together, sorry if its a little to short, i just wanted to make a story (note: the people are texting) and it kinda talks about a sensitive topic James, you know that new kid, Jean-Paul? yeah hes been acting a little strange... what do you mean? a few days ago, Jean looked Isabell right in the eyes, and it looked like his eyes went fully BLACK come on man, your just exaggerating. no i'm not, i swear his eyes went black. DUDE! WHAT? the principle came in class, and said that Isabell KILLED HERSELF. are you being serious? YES. dude, its Jean-Paul, i bet. maybe, lets get some evidence. ok, i'm going to follow him home, and see what he does on the way... you sure about this? yeah. ok dude. (a few hours later) ok, hes going into an alleyway. OMG DUDE WHAT it was a trap... (his eyes went black) Jack? Jack you there? i can feel it James... feel what? the DREAD its consuming me... i'm walking up the stairs... dude don't do anything stupid i can't hold myself back... wait... i have an idea what? go up to Jean-Paul, and INSULT him. what? but then ill probably end up like you! QUICKLY OK. when you insult him, walk into the bathroom, and DUCK. what? why? JUST DO IT i'm standing on the edge of the roof James... I DID IT! YES! the curse broke! but what about Jean-Paul? you insulted him, and he came after you. but when you ducked, his eyes went black, but instead of hitting you, it hit the mirror, so HE cursed himself. whoa! hes running up the stairs! yeah, because he cursed himself... o yeah. where are you? i'm at the cafeteria. ok, ill see you there. (a few minutes later) i'm sorry i have to do this James, but if i don't, we can't be friends anymore... what do you mean Jack? (his eyes slowly turned black) you can be one of us now...
because, shes making an opinion that my grammar and punctuation is bad. why do all my threads end up turning into a flame war
can you take a hint? i don't care. now can you just stay off this thread if your just gonna keep flaming?
This was the ugliest and stupidest creep-pasta I have even seen. Seriously, if you're gonna write a creepypasta at least put some thought into it. And when he looked into the mirror and "cursed" himself, why didn't he die like medusa when she looked into the reflective shield? Overall its a good creepy story I like it.. PS: TO ALL GRAMMAR NAZIS: Grammar doesn't matter when writing a creepy-pasta, or on the internet.
