EUR Devan's Helper Application

SBAndroid · Jul 28, 2016

Idk as of now xD

JackyPlayzMC · Jul 29, 2016

I haven't seen you in game a lot i'm not sure whats wrong cause I've seen you a lot in the past but I still don't give support. Good luck!

KingDG · Jul 29, 2016

No support. While your application is good, you need to acquire more experience on the forums (and I don't see you often in game ).

Just a tip: when you get multiple pieces of feedback, don't respond to them individually; it gets a little spammy.
I'm referring to your

AmazingPlays said: ↑

Thank you for the long feedback, Chicky. I have read your comment and done all the improvement tasks that you've set for me. I haven't been on in a while because of some internet issues. I hope you support me soon.
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AmazingPlays said: ↑

Thank you for the feedback. The reason that I haven't been on in a while is due to some internet issues. But I will message you if you're online.
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AmazingPlays said: ↑

Hey SkyTrade!
It's ok, I like long feedbacks, it let's me know how well I've done in my application and how much I need to improve on.
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AmazingPlays said: ↑

Ok. Thank you for the feedback. I will be more active now since my internet is now ok.
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on page 1.
Try to fit them all into one message.
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Chicky said: ↑

First off, I just want to say, sorry. If I've offended you in any way. I don't normally correct moderator applications from the top to bottom specifically, but there was a lot. Of mistakes in this application that really annoyed me. I'm not saying that other people's applications are flawless, but you're application just had more mistakes.

Secondly, no support, you've only been on forums for like 20 days. As a moderator, your moderate both forums and in game. Get used to forums first, I'm pretty sure there are sections in which you don't understand. For example, you are not quoting other member's comments correctly. You click "Reply" next to the post count, and not from the options section. As you're not exactly quoting their comments. So they might not get your tag. Also, I see a lot of grammar, spelling issues in your application. For example:

To me, that doesn't really make sense. You're basically stating that you have looked at your last applications (I'm not sure if you have made multiple applications before, so correct me if I'm wrong) and the comments. Or do you mean you've taken constructive criticism from your past applications to make this application better? Feel free to correct me aha.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but base off what I've seen on here, forums, and what I've just searched up, GCSE's are for 16+ years old. Unless they're "extremely" gifted in a certain.

That didn't make too much sense to me either, please re-state that. You don't say, "If my end of year target was a D2 (6B), and I was a D1 (6A) at the end of the year..." Maybe you can say "My goal for the end of the academic year was a D2 (6B), and I've achieved a D1 (6a) at the end of this academic year. Which means, that I have passed, my end of year goal, which is excellent." Something like that, idk, it just didn't sound right to me.

Oops, spelling error right there. It's unfortunately, and not whatever you spelt. Also, not doing the language? Or do you mean not studying the languages anymore?

Grammar error once again? You should write "I've looked" instead of I looked, and maybe rephrase that sentence too to something like, "I was looking through the moderator application template, just so I get an idea of what I'm going to be answering while writing my application.

I don't think I need to know, that you didn't know what 2FA meant. As it just shows your weakness (I wouldn't say it's a weakness but I just didn't know which word to use so I'll edit this when the word comes to my mind), it also didn't make much sense. Either rephrase it or remove it, cause the last time I checked the question, it said "Yes/No" and not "How did you figure out what 2FA meant/is."

Yeah.. About that... Maybe you can put it in the "Do you have 2FA enabled" Section?? As to me, it really has nothing to do with "Do you have the necessary means of capturing evidence? (i.e. recording software, screenshots, etc)"

Just remove that, you can start you sentence with "One of the main reasons..."

Yeah, remove that too.

Bruh, no offense, but please, just rephrase the whole thing to something like "When players get griefed and is asking for assistance in global chat, I /msg them and assist them by checking if there are any moderators online. And if there are moderators online, I would /msg the moderator for the player who got griefed." Also, take out the "Find out who grief the innocent (as I say)" part. Besides, it doesn't really make sense if you just /tpahere a moderator right? It's not like you're just going to accept a random person's teleport. And what if they have /tptoggle on? How are you going to /tpahere them to you?? So it'd make more sense if you just said you /msged them. As they have /tp themselves and do not need your /tpahere.

No offense, but are you sure? Cause there is actually a lot. Of mistakes on here being corrected by a 12 year old who's fully chinese / asian. And we really don't need to know that it's taken you three weeks to check if every word was spelt right, etc. You haven't even been, on forums for 3 weeks since you posted your application. Tomorrow, would be three weeks for you. lmao.

You have met or you've meet the requirements? Please restate that. For example, "Yes, I do meet the requirements for staff."

Okay okay, let me get this straight, you have a lot more mistakes, in your application, so please re-read it, cause I doubt you actually read it over and over. There are more mistakes that I haven't stated, as I really can't be bothered to quote, bold, italic, make the words red, tell you how to rephrase them, and repeat that process over and over. I have seen you in game a while back, as I don't really log on as much now, I cannot judge your activity. But, I recall not seeing you helping players in chat. So no support. My support status may boost up, but base off what I'm seeing it's not going to boost up until I see actual. Changes. Also, I'm pretty sure we all know what helpful, responsible, honest, truthful, patient, and confidence means. You also stated:

These definitions you're using, are from the dictionary. Do you not understand what it means? Why can't you state it in your own words? Anyhow, good luck.
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And lol Chicky, if you're going to be that critical about spelling, grammar, and punctuation, then I think your own criticism should be at least close to being error free as well--yet it's riddled with errors. :l Take your first sentence, for instance ("First off, I just want to say, sorry."). There shouldn't be a comma between "say" and "sorry."

It's understandable that an excessive amount of errors in an application can be detrimental to the applicant; however, I think that instead of judging how an applicant gives information, we should be assessing the actual information itself.

eunice · Jul 29, 2016

KingDG said: ↑

There shouldn't be a comma between "say" and "sorry."
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That was done intentionally.

KingDG · Jul 29, 2016

Chicky said: ↑

That was done intentionally.
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Mkay, fine. Take your second and third sentences--there shouldn't be a period in between "lot" and "of," and the word "was" should be "were," as "mistakes" is plural. The first sentence was just an example.

eunice · Jul 29, 2016

KingDG said: ↑

Mkay, fine. Take your second and third sentences--there shouldn't be a period in between "lot" and "of," and the word "was" should be "were," as "mistakes" is plural. The first sentence was just an example.
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Well, I'm not the one applying for moderator, I really don't care about my grammar, lmao. Please keep this post on topic

Devannn_ · Jul 29, 2016

rodentlover12 said: ↑

Idk as of now xD
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Ok.

JackyPlayzMC said: ↑

I haven't seen you in game a lot i'm not sure whats wrong cause I've seen you a lot in the past but I still don't give support. Good luck!
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Sorry, I haven't been on in a while. My internet is really bad and I had some issues. I'm getting my internet upgraded so I don't have to worry about these issues anymore. I'll message you when you're online.

KingDG said: ↑

No support. While your application is good, you need to acquire more experience on the forums (and I don't see you often in game ).

Just a tip: when you get multiple pieces of feedback, don't respond to them individually; it gets a little spammy.
I'm referring to your

on page 1.
Try to fit them all into one message.
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And lol Chicky, if you're going to be that critical about spelling, grammar, and punctuation, then I think your own criticism should be at least close to being error free as well--yet it's riddled with errors. :l Take your first sentence, for instance ("First off, I just want to say, sorry."). There shouldn't be a comma between "say" and "sorry."

It's understandable that an excessive amount of errors in an application can be detrimental to the applicant; however, I think that instead of judging how an applicant gives information, we should be assessing the actual information itself.
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Ok. Thanks for the feedback. I will try to fix something with the individual messages. (No offence Chicky) But I was thinking the same with your grammar, spelling, and punctuation in the feedback. But it doesn't matter because you're not applying for a mod (As you said).

Dill Pickle · Jul 29, 2016

Chicky said: ↑

First off, I just want to say, sorry. If I've offended you in any way. I don't normally correct moderator applications from the top to bottom specifically, but there was a lot. Of mistakes in this application that really annoyed me. I'm not saying that other people's applications are flawless, but you're application just had more mistakes.

Secondly, no support, you've only been on forums for like 20 days. As a moderator, your moderate both forums and in game. Get used to forums first, I'm pretty sure there are sections in which you don't understand. For example, you are not quoting other member's comments correctly. You click "Reply" next to the post count, and not from the options section. As you're not exactly quoting their comments. So they might not get your tag. Also, I see a lot of grammar, spelling issues in your application. For example:

To me, that doesn't really make sense. You're basically stating that you have looked at your last applications (I'm not sure if you have made multiple applications before, so correct me if I'm wrong) and the comments. Or do you mean you've taken constructive criticism from your past applications to make this application better? Feel free to correct me aha.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but base off what I've seen on here, forums, and what I've just searched up, GCSE's are for 16+ years old. Unless they're "extremely" gifted in a certain.

That didn't make too much sense to me either, please re-state that. You don't say, "If my end of year target was a D2 (6B), and I was a D1 (6A) at the end of the year..." Maybe you can say "My goal for the end of the academic year was a D2 (6B), and I've achieved a D1 (6a) at the end of this academic year. Which means, that I have passed, my end of year goal, which is excellent." Something like that, idk, it just didn't sound right to me.

Oops, spelling error right there. It's unfortunately, and not whatever you spelt. Also, not doing the language? Or do you mean not studying the languages anymore?

Grammar error once again? You should write "I've looked" instead of I looked, and maybe rephrase that sentence too to something like, "I was looking through the moderator application template, just so I get an idea of what I'm going to be answering while writing my application.

I don't think I need to know, that you didn't know what 2FA meant. As it just shows your weakness (I wouldn't say it's a weakness but I just didn't know which word to use so I'll edit this when the word comes to my mind), it also didn't make much sense. Either rephrase it or remove it, cause the last time I checked the question, it said "Yes/No" and not "How did you figure out what 2FA meant/is."

Yeah.. About that... Maybe you can put it in the "Do you have 2FA enabled" Section?? As to me, it really has nothing to do with "Do you have the necessary means of capturing evidence? (i.e. recording software, screenshots, etc)"

Just remove that, you can start you sentence with "One of the main reasons..."

Yeah, remove that too.

Bruh, no offense, but please, just rephrase the whole thing to something like "When players get griefed and is asking for assistance in global chat, I /msg them and assist them by checking if there are any moderators online. And if there are moderators online, I would /msg the moderator for the player who got griefed." Also, take out the "Find out who grief the innocent (as I say)" part. Besides, it doesn't really make sense if you just /tpahere a moderator right? It's not like you're just going to accept a random person's teleport. And what if they have /tptoggle on? How are you going to /tpahere them to you?? So it'd make more sense if you just said you /msged them. As they have /tp themselves and do not need your /tpahere.

No offense, but are you sure? Cause there is actually a lot. Of mistakes on here being corrected by a 12 year old who's fully chinese / asian. And we really don't need to know that it's taken you three weeks to check if every word was spelt right, etc. You haven't even been, on forums for 3 weeks since you posted your application. Tomorrow, would be three weeks for you. lmao.

You have met or you've meet the requirements? Please restate that. For example, "Yes, I do meet the requirements for staff."

Okay okay, let me get this straight, you have a lot more mistakes, in your application, so please re-read it, cause I doubt you actually read it over and over. There are more mistakes that I haven't stated, as I really can't be bothered to quote, bold, italic, make the words red, tell you how to rephrase them, and repeat that process over and over. I have seen you in game a while back, as I don't really log on as much now, I cannot judge your activity. But, I recall not seeing you helping players in chat. So no support. My support status may boost up, but base off what I'm seeing it's not going to boost up until I see actual. Changes. Also, I'm pretty sure we all know what helpful, responsible, honest, truthful, patient, and confidence means. You also stated:

These definitions you're using, are from the dictionary. Do you not understand what it means? Why can't you state it in your own words? Anyhow, good luck.
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GCSE are for 14 years old plus.

Devannn_ · Jul 29, 2016

Nick_ said: ↑

GCSE are for 14 years old plus.
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They've changed it from Year 10 and Year 11 to Year 9, Year 10 and Year 11.

Dill Pickle · Jul 29, 2016

AmazingPlays said: ↑

They've changed it from Year 10 and Year 11 to Year 9, Year 10 and Year 11.
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Yeah I know, but for me my GCSEs start in September, when I am in year 10.

Devannn_ · Jul 29, 2016

Nick_ said: ↑

Yeah I know, but for me my GCSEs start in September, when I am in year 10.
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. You're a year older than me.

Dill Pickle · Jul 29, 2016

AmazingPlays said: ↑

. You're a year older than me.
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Yep

eunice · Jul 30, 2016

Resupport to neutral. Keep up the good work.

Annn · Jul 30, 2016

No Support, I play 16 hours everyday this week and I've only seen you on for a couple of hours, and you weren't doing much. I remember you playing my casino but that's all. And explain a little more of why we would want you to be a Moderator

Devannn_ · Jul 30, 2016

AN_AM God Division said: ↑

No Support, I play 16 hours everyday this week and I've only seen you on for a couple of hours, and you weren't doing much. I remember you playing my casino but that's all. And explain a little more of why we would want you to be a Moderator
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Ok. To be honest, I cannot remember you and I cannot remember playing your casino.

Devannn_ · Jul 30, 2016

Chicky said: ↑

Resupport to neutral. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks!

Skytrade · Jul 31, 2016

Support
I think you would do a great job as a Mod
Just be more active in forums
apart from that
Good luck

Devannn_ · Jul 31, 2016

Skytrade said: ↑

Support
I think you would do a great job as a Mod
Just be more active in forums
apart from that
Good luck
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Thankyou!!!

athyrix · Aug 3, 2016

Hello, AmazingPlays.

I thought your application was good, however you should remove that you used to learn German & French, because looking at other people's comments, it looks as if it had lots of errors in it. I found it really hard to read because of everything being in italics and I haven't seen you helping too much, and I don't know about forums. I'm giving you a Neutral but more to the No Support side. Good luck, AmazingPlays!

Devannn_ · Aug 3, 2016

Dough said: ↑

Hello, AmazingPlays.

I thought your application was good, however you should remove that you used to learn German & French, because looking at other people's comments, it looks as if it had lots of errors in it. I found it really hard to read because of everything being in italics and I haven't seen you helping too much, and I don't know about forums. I'm giving you a Neutral but more to the No Support side. Good luck, AmazingPlays!
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Ok thanks for the reply.

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