Try Not to Cry

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  1. xWolfite
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    This story is Somewhat Fictional. There is factors true to my life story. Some is true. Some is fake. My objective today is to make you cry, (or try to)

    Let the story.

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    The thunderous clouds lit up the dark empty streets and the lustrous stars glowed brightly among the sky.
    The rain tapped against the glass of my bedroom window and the thunder forced me awake with every strike of energy the clouds emerged. as the clouds settled I closed my eyes and began drifting into slumber.

    Before sleeping I watched a Halloween special movie which ended up giving me the chills. I couldn't spend an hour without thinking about it. as I slept I began to picture images about my cat, We were playing in the tall grass when I saw my cat fall into a hole I ran after him and looked down the hole I saw nothing but darkness and I heard his meow become quieter and quieter I ran around frantically looking for anyone to help. my body was shaking and I called down the hole and shouted "I'm coming for you" The hole was too small for me to rescue him and all of a sudden the world began spiraling into a dark endless void I fell and fell and eventually saw a light and as I approached the white horizon my eyes awoke and I looked around. I sighed with a relief and searched around for my cat. I saw him sleeping on top of me and I stroked his tiny little head.

    Two weeks have passed and my cat was as happy as ever. We decided to take him to the park and to my surprise the park looked exactly like the one in my dream. My mom called me over and I let my cat wander off on his own. and after half an hour or so and I lost my cat. I searched and searched and Couldn't find him.

    Two days have passed and no sign or trace of him were found. After a while I lived to forget about him. Until I heard a faint knock on the door and as I opened it I saw someone with a sad and unforgetting face. I stared at the box in his hand and he left it in front of me without saying a word. We took the parcel in and closed the door unaware of what we might find inside the box. We opened it as it felt heavier than usual and found a gruesome sight. We saw our cat. Not alive. But dead. Stuffed. we burst into tears and looked around the shocking parcel left us horrendously terrified and tearful at the same time.

    Well Thanks for reading. Hope I managed to shed one tear. :)
     
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  2. bentener
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    I love Cats ;-;
     
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    I hate don't particularly like cats :[
    I didn't cry
     
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    i didn't cry or honestly make an emotion.

    probably 'cause it's just words. if it was happening in a real life situation i was involved in, maybe.
     
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    Who the heck takes into his/her home random heavy boxes from strangers who showed up at the front door? O_O

    and no, no tears were shed :I
     
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    I didn't cry, but this is a perfect example of the Schrödinger's cat paradox.
     
  7. xWolfite
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    I forgot to realize that some people aren't a cat person or don't particularly like cats xD
     
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    This was sad, but as some others had said, it's words so it's not very sad. Also, I do like cats - but if I didn't, this still would've been sad as it's a living animal.
     
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    Why cats why not cockroaches :(
     
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    What a nice meal.
    Wait I mean hope your cats doing fine
     
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    Yes my cat's doing fine.
    In fact the entire story was based around my cat. and around a Nightmare I had which took place a week ago involving him.
     
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    I'm not the biggest fan of cats, in fact I'm actually quite terrified of them. But I gotta say, this story was quite sad.. My eyes were watering but I didn't exactly cry xd
     
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    wtf nope I've seen way sadder
     
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    i cried because you had random capital letters everywhere
     
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    It was a good story, but since it's just words (and I'm more of a dog person) I didn't really cry. If you changed it to a movie, and added more detail and music into it, might've got me
     
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    U got me xD
     

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