Support. Your active a lot and you are very mature for this responsibility, and by the look of your application its very accurate! Good Luck!

 

I have this habit of reading things bottom to top and when I got to the "Info About Me" I saw this word. I. It is not capitalized! I didn't catch any non-capitalized words until then and got my hopes up...but...then I saw this word. My heart stopped. Fix this please.
I know, I like to write in the smallest font I can too, but for applications, no. Yes, I know that it doesn't say to judge an application by its letter size, but I suggest writing a little bigger?
At the end of the "Helpful" section (very last word) there is this word that doesn't need to be there, "but". There is nothing after this word.
I honestly don't think that the "Reasons to kick, mute, ban a player and Info About Me" sections are important, but they won't hurt your application. It sort of looks like you're just trying to make your application longer. Length doesn't matter. Maybe try adding more detail for each quality such as, why the quality will help you as a moderator.
Other than that, try to put some more detail, be a little more active on Forums, and help more on Forums. I'll add and thinh that comes to mind. You've changed Ben, I can tell that you are more mature and helpful than before. 100% support from me, best of luck.

 

Sorry, I changed my support status to 90%

Add color? More to why do I think I should be a mod?

 

Thanks for the feedback

 

Support

I like your application just add a tad more detail here and there :]

 

Neutral, work on maturity.

 

Thanks for the feedback Jxnaa

 

70% support,you were rude to me and you werent replying in my msg In game...btw you are active and always in game

 

When was I rude to you, and didn't reply because I don't reply to people who ask for stuff.

 

Llease when i made my own Mod apply after 1 year do not do revenge no support thank you

 

I don't do that, I review the application by the detail and reasons, and plus you 70% supported not no support.

[EDIT] If your application doesn't have good reasons etc. I may no support.

 

[Update] I have updated my application with more color, and changed a few things on it.

 

Write: I have learnt my lesson (unless you didn't)

Full support.

 

Thanks for pointing that out

 

You're welcome. Good luck!!!

 

No support

-Short and not well explained mod application
-Saw for the first time tonight and i'm in time zone
-Tonight you were being rude and spamming chat

Sorry

~Jaimee

 

How was he being rude?
Ben is a friendly and active member. You may not see him in chat because you might be doing some builds.

 

Support, but have your profile OR conversations accessable

 

Suggested listening: Drowning Pool, Tear Away​

Hidden Content:

**Hidden Content: You must click 'Like' before you can see the hidden data contained here.**

Ahh, Australia! The only country I know of that exports terrifying spiders and murderjuice. +1 immediately for living to age 13, Mr. Ben -- that had to be tough with Lord Humungus demanding tribute.

You already have my respect.

Nice to meet you, sir. Don't listen to negative people: Always keep your magix.

A giant +1 to you for correctly listing your time zone. I have done several "Aussie Reviews" and most of them put something like "AEDST" here. The rest of the world has no idea what that means, it is nice to see someone putting a standardized offset.

Famous for being where Mel Gibson ruined apocalypse movies! ...and also the Sydney Symphony Orchestra.

+1 for being multi-lingual. Italy is a rather nice place, sir. Knowing where you're growing up I can definitely say you would be one of the toughest people there.

Wait, please. Let me slip into something more comfortable...​

I love this part of applications like a fat kid loves candy. This is usually the highlight of my evening and I want to enjoy every moment. Proceed!

That is a lot of commas, some things need to be separated a bit, before you go into a new thought, but I am liking the enthusiasm, keep it up.

Remove anything about "I know I'm not the best" and swap the personally for personality. Don't put something in your job application about how you aren't very good-- that kind of defeats the purpose of applying, sir.

Gimme, gimme, gimme.

Read that out loud and try to avoid a tracheobronchial injury.

I am glancing down your list of qualities and I think you might benefit from reading this post (link), sir. Just a idea; don't feel like you're being pressured. Your paragraphs are very thin on details and I believe a little more explanation would benefit your application.

You are saying "help" more often than a parrot at a depression support group. Find a synonym; try something like "I enjoy assisting other players in-game by answering questions. There are a lot of people that need attention and I try to get to them as often as possible".

I think something went wrong here...​

I think you took a left turn at the corner of Ramble St and Nonsense Ave. Nothing here says anything about dedication or demonstrates any quality of perseverance-- did you copy and paste this from somewhere else by accident...?

Please rewrite this to explain how dedicated you are, why that matters as a Moderator and how it will help players on the game.

#Triggered​

Do not disqualify yourself in your own qualification: "I'm always honest, I rarely lie" is such a bizarre statement that Donald Trump is suing you for stealing his intellectual property.

Normally I recommend removing anything about honesty, integrity, etc: These are traits you cannot prove you have by talking about them. But your application is so short I'm concerned about removing anything at all, sir.

If you are going to keep this then please give examples for how honest you are. "I have been in a coop for five months with no incidents" is a good one, or perhaps "There has never been a report against me" -- something like that.

That was some verbal Twister, I had to read your sentence three times to understand it. Can you rephrase to "I am respectful to everyone whether they deserve it or not"? Something like that? This confused me pretty badly for a moment.

You are wasting more white space than a KKK rally, sir. This list of commands and punishments is roughly 15% of your entire word count. That is not a good thing. None of this promotes your application, gives insight into your character or sets you apart from the pack of applicants.

Anyone can copy and paste a list of commands. Why not spend this space discussing the importance of when to use your authority? For example "It is important to handle every case in a fair manner. Banning, muting and kicking are easy to do but shouldn't be the default option". I'm completely making this up but hopefully you understand the point.

+1 for posting a schedule, excellent job.

Put this in your "Dedication" quality! You have been continuously playing for one-sixth of your entire life! Now that is some serious commitment.

+1, nicely done. No need to elaborate or justify; just say it, apologize, move on.

Did you kill them? Not accusing, just asking sir.

You forgot to mention what your "experience" is. What were you in charge of? Grief investigations? Public Relations? Item reimbursements? Minigame Dude? This is your time to stand out from everyone else by detailing your exceptional ability to convince players to donate. Spend some time here and write a bit.

You're quite welcome, Mr. Magix. This was extremely fast-- you've skipped pretty much every detail in favor of a skeleton application. That works if your qualifications are very well written and to the point... but you missed that mark. At the very least you need to run a spellcheck over this to get rid of the "I'am" errors.

Spend a bit of time reading your qualifications and fleshing them out. At a bare minimum each quality needs to explain How you demonstrate it and Why it matters for the job position you want. This can only help you. Or just ignore me, these reviews are three day old garbage.

Support Status: I'am Waiting For More
(write like you are rich, edit like you are poor)​