Butterbacon16 (Mod Application)

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Butterbacon16, Apr 12, 2013.

  1. Butterbacon16
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    IGN: Butterbacon16
    AGE: 12
    TIMEZONE: central USA
    COUNTRY: USA
    LANGUAGE: English
    BANS?: nope
    WHY: Because I have been on the server for a long time and I love your server! I love the mods on this server and because my parents wont let me buy a rank. I would love mod!
    QUALIFICATIONS: I have vary good building skills and can help anyone that needs help.
    I also love getting on servers! So you could expect me to get on a lot.
    HOW LONG ON SERVER?: I will try to get on a crap ton on the weekends and I could get on on the afternoons of the weekdays.
    HOW LONG HAVE I BEEN PLAYING?: I have been playing for at least a year.
    EXPERIENCE AS A MOD?: I have been a mod on at least 5 different servers. I have also been a admin on about 3 and co owner on 1.
    OTHER STUFF: I have mad my own adventure map on the forums. It is called Z day. I have played on Minecraft for about 3 years now and have learned a crap ton about stuff like how to make a server, make a skin, make a texture pack, and even make other people download stuff like that adventure map! I learned about the server when my 250$ doner friend (Enderbacon16) saw the server and wanted to see the server. He joined and say it was awesome! So one day I asked where he gos on MC so often and he told me this server. I joined and loved it! To this day I love this server and play on it as much as I can!
    So far I have upgraded my island to the point where it is big and has a crap ton of stuff like diamond, iron , and butter.
    I hate cheating. I just freaken hate hackers and cheaters. They are stupid.
    Ill give this server IP to about every person I know about this server if I become mod. I have already gave it to a lot of people too!
    Thank you for reading my mod application!
     
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  2. vfhuuuuu
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    vfhuuuuu Active Member

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    Bump. (letters)
     
  3. PigisHorse
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    PigisHorse Active Member

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    You do not need to say your friend is a 250donor. Nobody really cares! Anyways it's a really bad app! Sorry!
     
    Last edited: Jun 17, 2016
  4. Gingehhhh
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    Gingehhhh Well-Known Member

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    Hey there sweetheart.
    I'll keep it short and sweet.
    Look at other mod applications to get some ideas.
    You're fairly new, just get to know the server and the forums more. Being a moderator is about the forums too.
    Add more detail.
    Add color, maybe?
    Never seen you online.
     
  5. Mister Rice
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    Mister Rice Member

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    Not to be rude just giving advice :p! Don't take it personally, it's work (jk).
    This mod application is very poorly done
    "Because I have been on the server for a long time and I love your server! I love the mods on this server and because my parents wont let me buy a rank. I would love mod!" This is one of the worst reasons to be mod, you can just say that you want to be mod and that your parents aren't allowing you to get a ranked.

    Overall, you need to be dedicated, you have to prove Cyp that you want this position

    also don't use the language "crap", "butter", "freaken", etc. it really shows how immature you are and that you're not ready to become a moderator.

    "Ill give this server IP to about every person I know about this server if I become mod. I have already gave it to a lot of people too!" this is more of a bribing side.. you saying if you become mod you'll give the IP away.

    Also please be more active on the fourms, and according to Gingehhhh you seem to never be online.

    There may be more but I'll stop here
    Next time you reapply if you will, try to think about what makes you stand out

    ~Signing out MrRice :p
     
  6. Ca1
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    No support.
    Sorry, but you do not meet the requirements to become a moderator.
    >You need 50 posts on forums
    >You need to have 2FA enabled
     
  7. Jxnaa
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    Jxnaa Active Member

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    No support, reasons already stated.
     
  8. Legend_AceXD
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    Your application is very hard to read because the way its formatted. The rate you have been mod and admin on servers sounds like you were a part of a small server. Not to judge, but those servers need help getting started so honestly anybody is good enough and then the server never takes off because they have a couple of goofballs running not saying that your one but the owners are. You can't recruit anybody you want and expect the server to take off like this one. Applying for staff on a bigger server is also a totally different story. It can be a lot more intense criticism because there is no goofing around and by the looks of the app that I just saw you think this is a 20 player server.
    Right there I will highlight what is not good.. what your saying is that you can't buy a rank so you want mod as a filler because they have their own privileges. Well hate to break it to you, but mod is a voluntary job. So their is no games in this. You said that you developed an adventure map? What does that have to do with patrolling a server and forum. I'm sorry I look through your app and see you have potential, but you see VERY immature you still saying butter, crap, and freaking on a mod app.

    NO support maybe next time, but I didn't get 1 reason why you should be mod out of this. Good luck you have potential!
     
  9. Emerald
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    Emerald Senior Member

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    Sorry, but you do not meet the requirements to become a moderator.
    -You need 50 posts on forums
    -You need to have 2FA enabled
    -You need to be active
    -You have to add lots of more to your mod application
    -Get use to the server and forums
    -Add some color to your application
    -Follow the new format
    -I don't see you help


    Just some suggestions and my opinion


    NO SUPPORT

     
  10. Legend_AceXD
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    You do most hacks are allowed apart from combat and fly, spider and other related ones except for step...
     
  11. Interneting
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    No support, sorry. You don't meet all of the requirements and this app could use some more detail. Also, it'd be nice if you could add some color.
     
  12. kaliaa
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    No support, reasons stated above.

    A lot of spelling errors and language

    Like crap (Never use this, you sound a bit immature)
    stupid (Say terrible or anything that is related to bad)

    If your parents won't let you buy a donor, how is this anything to do with becoming a mod? Shouldn't add that in.
     
  13. Weiss
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    No support, reasons stated above.
     
  14. Xethorias
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    No Support.
    #Otherwords
     
  15. Hypebeasting
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    Hypebeasting Member

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    No support, read requirements before applying for mod.
     
  16. PigisHorse
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    PigisHorse Active Member

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    Why can people not be able to write good aplications?
     

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