ASIA Hiveria's Moderator Application [Korea]

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  1. Weiss
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    Thanks for the feedback. I will improve this.
     
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    Support if I haven't already.
    I have seen you helping out alot more in-game
    Good Luck! :p
     
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    Thanks for the feedback.
    Is there anything I can approve on?
     
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    Thank you for the feedback. I'll work on that. :)
    ~Sorry for the late reply.
     
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    Suggested listening: Vamo Alla Flamenco

    Ladies and gentlemen, this evening is wonderful. You are all beautiful people and every single person alive has every right to be happy. Except Trump. #NotTrump2016

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    Highly optimistic.

    More excited than a kid finding a Christmas present in July. Let's get this started.
    You're quite welcome! Liking the enthusiasm so far, I'm already shouting 'application!' so much my daughter yelled at me from the other room to "hush that fuss, dad".

    #HushThatFuss

    Lovely to meet you, 九尾狐. Better watch my cows.

    Oh, very nice. I have spent a lot of time in Seoul and Yongsan and I remember how absolutely brutal the seasons were.

    That is an incredible amount of languages, +1. Ideographic all the way to glottal; you have a future career in voice acting. I am seriously impressed.

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    I'm sure those cows were just fiiiine.

    Don't worry about the autoban too much, Ms. Foxx. This server tends to kick people more often than Chun Li-- I'm not sure it means much and definitely won't torpedo your application.

    Ermh. OK, you just made me check the .Net template in case someone changed the questions. I don't see this listed on the template anywhere, but thank you for the extra information. Won't hurt your application.

    +1 for realistic amounts of time on the server per day.

    Suggestion: Please list when you will be online, ma'am: Are you volunteering for the midnight to 3am shift? Will you be online after dinner, around 6pm? It is hard to hire you without knowing when you will be online.

    This. All of my Yes.

    This part of applications is literally the only reason I like reading posts. Let me get a fresh drink, read Myrmdaughter a bedtime story and give this my full attention. :brb
















    I'm back. I guess Cinderella now has a brother that helps her clean toilets. With his socks. Kids + imagination = weird bedtime stories. Let's get into this application again.

    Someone call the firefighters. There's some burning going on here.

    You are basically saying the current Moderator team isn't doing enough, ma'am. You probably didn't mean to sound that harsh. Even if you happen to be completely correct perhaps you could rephrase this in a way that doesn't criticize your future teammates?

    I am fairly sure when you are chosen for Moderator someone will help you with the commands, ma'am. This part does not hurt or help your application-- it is just odd to see.

    +1 for a well written qualification. Add in an example of why "respect" makes you a good Moderator and this would be excellent.

    I am more lost than Donald Trump at a women's rights rally. The topic header is "Rules"... but you talk about how long you've been on SkyBlock and mention you play on other Minecraft servers as well. Then you close with how much you've learned from those other servers.

    Rewrite this paragraph. You're looking to support "Rules" and how well you know/apply them. Your server experience can be listed somewhere else. I'm scratching my head a bit on this one, ma'am.

    +1, nice qualification and stated very well.

    Typing speed does not mean you can help right away. You might be helping someone else at the moment, or you need to figure out what's wrong, or perhaps you're just in the bathroom.

    I'm also not entirely sure "typing speed" is a requirement for Moderating. Mostly the job seems to be 2- and 3-word responses followed by a bucketload of common sense. I suppose being a fast typist won't hurt your application.

    +1. Pope Francis called, he said something about a job?

    I'm not entirely sure I can buy this, but if you believe it to be true then I admire that. Normally I would suggest you remove this portion: "Honesty" is a subject that the more you talk about it the less people believe you. But you seem to be very invested in the idea so good luck to you ma'am.

    Check. Your. Grammar. I understand what you are trying to say but those sentences made me wince.

    Were you going for something like this?:
    "Fast Learner: I am very quick to pick up on new ideas. When I first joined the server I spent some time studying and understanding the rules. Learning how to do things right has always helped me in school and is very important to me as a future Moderator: The skills I was taught for studying math, language and science can be applied to making me a good choice for the staff team."​

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    Pet peeve activated.

    Do not begin a qualification by disqualifying yourself. "Serious: It's ok to have fun. I'm fairly strict. Not too strict. When I need to be serious, I'm serious": This back and forth gave me whiplash so hard I hired a lawyer to sue you for spinal damages.

    If your topic is how serious you are then please stick with supporting statements. Do not talk about how you are not serious or give reasons why you won't be. This confuses your message horribly and makes your qualification messy.

    REWRITE THIS. None of these statements go together or supports your "Fair" topic header. This seems like completely unrelated thoughts put down to make the application a bit longer. Go back, take a look at this portion and rewrite it to explain how you are fair and why that would make you a good Moderator.

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    Argghhhhdegerbgyjrascdxfkghhj!!!!

    Do not disqualify yourself in your own application. Why would you do this? If you cannot say something nice about your job application then at least do not suggest someone else would be better.

    If you really, really want to say your application isn't the best then at least give a link to another thread that would be better for the job. I am kidding; don't do that. Have a little confidence in yourself and remove any mention of how you're not the best.


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    Is there anything I can approve on in my application?
     
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    Full support you'd make an amazing mod. Ur so helpful omg!! You do a better job then a lot of mods (my opinion).
     
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    Support! I think you'd make a very nice mod. I have seen you a few times, and when I do, you are always helping! (You have a lovely timezone, however we have almost opposite timezones so I don't see you much due to that.)
     
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    Thank you. ♥♥
     
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    Thank you so much ♥ I'll do my best
     
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    There are more commands but you need a tiny bit more detail and support :p
     
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    I'll work on that. :)
    Thanks for the feedback!
     
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    No problem! ;)
     
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    eek. full support. I see you online heaps and you're always helping other people out. Goodluck.
     
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    I fully support you, I always see you on and you're great help. ;)
     
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    Thank you! :)
     
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    *I only see you in chat very little -10%
    *You need to add more detail on why you want to be mod -10%
     
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    Thank you for the feedback. :)
     
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    Full support! Good luck :)
    • super helpful
    • Faster at typing than me! gg
    • Kind
    • Caring
    • Understanding
     
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