AlbanianBoy's Moderator Application

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  1. AlbanianBoy
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    AlbanianBoy Active Member

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    Hey there! Thank you for reading my Moderator Application.
    Your in-game name:
    My name is AlbanianBoy aka Arian(IRL name)!
    Which timezone are you in?:
    I live in Belgium, in Europe ! ​
    The timezone here is CEST – Central European Summer Time
    Which languages do you speak?:
    I can speak Dutch,English,French,Albanian !
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?):
    I've been banned multiple times by the Ban Hammer because of insane lagg!
    Why do you think you should be a mod?:
    I think that i should become a mod because:​
    Helpful:
    There is always that one guy in the chat that types like:'I'm new on skyblock, could anyone help me?'
    99% of the people ignore that kinda messages, but when i see that kinda messages i immediately visit that guy and give him stacks of tools & build material!
    If you have a nice island in skyblock, some stacks of tools and build material is nothing for you, right ?
    But it helps a beginner a lot, these tools etc.
    It also makes me feel good and gives me a good feeling inside! :)
    Respectful:
    I try to help everyone with respect, even if you're a beginner and don't know anything about skyblock, i'll always try to help people with respect cuzz that's where it begin's right ? Respect!
    #FightForRespect#Old#Clan
    Friendly:
    It's a fact that i'm a friendy guy.
    I always try to help everyone in a friendly way, even if i'm angry at that moment!
    Responsive:
    I hate it when mod's or donor's,etc don't reponse and ignore you !
    That's why i never ignore someone, even if that person is annoying as hell!
    How long can you be active on the server every day?:
    I've a pretty simple life, when i come home i study immediately( takes like an hour), when i'm done with studying i immediately go on Skyblock!
    So i could be everyday like 2-3 hours online, during vacantions like 6-9 hours(#NoLife).
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?:
    I've never been a moderator before...
    Thanks alot for reading my Application !
    Greets Arian aka AlbanianBoy!
    :blush:




    99T
     
    • No Support No Support x 6
    • Support Support x 1
  2. Dxckyy
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    Dxckyy Active Member

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    I'ma pull a Myrmidous

    Hey there! Thank you for reading my Moderator Application:
    Hello there AlbanianBoy (Weird name since you're from Belgium). Also why did you say Thank you for reading my Moderator application if I'm just starting to read it. Say : Welcome to my Moderator Application.

    Well nice to meet you Arian.
    There aren't a lot of mods where you're from . Good to see you're giving the exact Time Zone +1 as a lot of people usually get this question wrong.
    Nice to know that you are bilingual Definition:Bilingual. Also if you were to impress others put Sentences of something like. This is the Language Dutch (but in Dutch and with the rest of the languages).
    Weird how have you been banned from lagg (lag). Is it because you flew. Or what? Also what's up with the change of the font size?
    Omg I'm so spiced up I can't wait to read this.
    There are a lot of grammar mistakes in this 1 part. Also if there was someone new you would /visit them and give him/her stacks of tools and build materials? No if you were to be helpful to someone you would help them with letting them know how the server works and how to build an island and the rules of the server. Also being helpful doesn't mean you have a nice island in skyblock some stacks of tools and build material is nothing for you, right (Rephrase this whole helpful part from "but to inside"
    Everything in respect is wrong so I mind you rephrase everything here. Why do you help people with respect ? I thought you treat people with respect Defintion:Respect.
    It's good that you're friendly but this seems like your talking about how friendly/helpful you are so add friendly to helpful Helpful/Friendly.
    A lot of grammar mistakes just in these two sentences. Also don't use "Annoying as Hell" in your Responsive as it makes you look immature.
    Still a lot of grammar mistakes just in these 2 sentences. Also I have never seen you online so I have no clue if you're that active.
    If you have tell us your experience moderating the server and tell us the commands that you would use on the rule breakers.
    Wow still grammar mistakes in this one sentence.

    Cons:
    Bad Grammar
    Never seen online
    Not active on the forums
    New member
    Not involved
    Application Needs More Detail.

    Pros:
    In your application you got the first 2 sections of right.
    Followed the template.

    Support Status: Obvious.
     
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2016
  3. Myrmidous
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    Myrmidous Well-Known Member Premium

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    SuperDucky_x : Good effort, sir. Please add suggestions on how to fix whatever issues you are pointing out. If you don't give fix suggestions then AlbanianBoy can't make edits to improve the post.

    AlbanianBoy :
    1. Your layout is odd. Half of your application is centered, the other half is not. Please use one or the other to make it easier to read your post.
    2. Stick with one font. If you must use two fonts then keep the same style: One font for questions, the other font for answers. Switching between fonts rapidly is confusing.
    3. This is a job application. Remove slang words ("cuzz") and hashtags ("#FightForRespect, #Old, #Clan"). These make your application look like you're not taking the position seriously.
    4. You are not a native English speaker so grammar errors here and there are fine. But spell check your application; there is no way "friendy" and "vacantions" got through unless you weren't checking.
    5. Apostrophe's do not's go on everything's. This might be a language issue: You speak English a lot better than I speak Dutch.
    6. Post what time you will be online. Will you be on in the morning? Afternoons? You cannot be hired unless we know when you will be available.

    If you need help rephrasing you can PM me what you're working on, sir. Be patient, though: I can check and proofread quickly but my free time to reply is very limited. Best of luck on your application and don't get discouraged: Our Support/No Support means nothing. Good writing beats everything.

    [EDIT:] Tag me after you make edits and I'll revise the Support section if necessary.
     
  4. Dxckyy
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    Dxckyy Active Member

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    Also mostly what Myrmidous said as well. Just fix a lot of the application and I will see if it's necessary to give you support.
     
  5. xWolfite
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    xWolfite Well-Known Member

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    AlbanianBoy
    Reasons stated Above. ^
    Try to Include more in your application and fix the off centered part,
    I've seen you in game once so your active..
    Overall goodluck :)
     
  6. bERYbERRY
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    bERYbERRY c000000000000000kies Builder Premium

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  7. Archie
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    Archie Member

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    Support! He is really friendly in game to be honest. While he is maybe not as active, he deserves a great shot at it
     
  8. Archie
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    Archie Member

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    Great, but longer then myrm!
     
  9. Bossgamer
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    Bossgamer Super Moderator Super Moderator

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    > You are active
    > You sometimes help in chat.

    > A few grammar mistakes, as Superducky pointed out.
    > Try to add a little bit more detail.
    > Help in chat a little more.
    > Get used to the forums community, a moderator needs to be active both in-game and the forums.

    Look at accepted moderator applications to try to help you, just do not copy.

    Good Luck!
     
  10. 2Spooky4Me
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    2Spooky4Me Active Member

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    You have absolutely no clue how to use apostrophes, right?
    The plural of mod is mods, not mod's. Same for donor/donors
     
  11. bentener
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    bentener Well-Known Member

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    please help more.
     
  12. Ca1
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    Ca1 Guest

    50% More Detail
     
  13. XxX_Boi_XxX
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    XxX_Boi_XxX New Member

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    Being MOD is not to give away stuff but that's nice of you!
     
  14. Teeeb
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    Teeeb Well-Known Member

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    No support.
     
  15. toedsparta303
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    toedsparta303 Active Member

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    No Support:

    reasons stated above
     
  16. Queen
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    Queen Guest

    no support. constantly trolling people and never active online or forums
     
  17. AlbanianBoy
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    AlbanianBoy Active Member

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    I've Been banned tho
     
  18. tomtomiko
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    No support,

    ~ Lack of detail
    ~ Add more information as to why you should be picked above others
    ~Usually quality over quantity - Not this case
    ~Try to be more active - Never see you in-game or on forums

    Good luck.

    ~Tom :)
     
  19. Archie
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    Archie Member

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    He was my best friend
    He got perma banned :( No, really no joke he is permanently banned so that is why you have never seen him.
    Kind regards
    ~Archie
     
  20. fluffymonster209
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    fluffymonster209 New Member

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    No support,
    Lack of detail,
    no effort given
    be more active
     

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