Show your best here I believe that you have potential but you need to show it better. 1. What is .put? 2. Changing font sizes to the end look unappealing to the eyes 1. I do see you on a lot (mainly because I'm usually on with you) 2. You did give a correct estimate. 1. Now in the same sentence twice feels a little repetitive and choppy. 2. Spaces after periods 3.Can you explained what you did that made the owners want to give you moderator (obviously I already know, but many people don't) 1. You have been banned from Skyblock 2. And you need to explain what mistake you made on that one server that got you banned. 1. There is no reason to put mod in quotation marks 2. You can help without mod, which you have done many times in the past. 3. The transitions at the beginning of every sentence makes it sound a bit choppy. 4. Add a little more detail Only one comment, not problem, but suggestion. 1. Maybe you should put this in the introduction instead of making it its own paragraph. 1. Add more qualities, quality is key ( as Nenaa would say) 2. Saying your fast doesn't exactly PROVE your speed 3. What do you mean by 'I am really nice as I can be to everyone unless well you know' Well actually I don't know. Do mind explaining to me? No Support for now, but I know if you put your mind into writing this application you will make perfect and above standards.
