Neutral.

1. Remove the commands, looks like filler.
2. Correct the word grief.
3. Remove the rules also looks like filler.
4. Please do not put yourself down, it shows you have no confidence and takes away your chances of being a mod.
   
   
5. Don't ask people if they would like help, if mods did things like that the chat would be spammed

 

Neutral
~ Fix some grammar issues
~ Your application is all over the place, You didn't even include your timezone(the UK is not a timezone).
~ As you live in the UK and I in the US I can't say much about the in-game activity.
~ I am glad that you have been introduced to the forums but what would help is answering people questions in the "Help" section of the forums.
~ Also, you seem to be missing a few key questions. The questions are highlighted in red.

~Good Luck~

 

Neutral

 

^^^

 

Thanks, I will edit it

 

Thanks for your replies folks. I will not be editing this particular app yet seeing as I am going to be making a new one, keeping in mind that I should add bits to improve it.

Again, thanks for your help everyone!

 

You lack a lot of maturity and you got really worked up today because I asked you to stop messaging me. Never once have I seen you help someone out in-game.
No support.
Good luck.

 

Has helped me numerous times. Has my 100% support

 

Thanks Phreex.

 

No support-
You never help in game
When you are in-game, you are playing around with Aimee, Eleanora, Johnny, and other people.
You lack maturity

 

Hm. Well, all I can say is I do help in game.
Also, how do I lack maturity.
I need to know so I can 'improve' myself ;.;

 

I think you lack maturity because you lashed out at a player simply because you did not agree with what they were saying. You could've simply /ignored them, but you decided to continue the argument. You should also consider taking more constructive criticism on board. Yes you might think you help out players a lot, but others might not see that (/msg?) try to help people out as often as possible. That way people can see you do help out. However I still stand with what I said. No support.

 

no support, reasons stated above and beyond.
gl tho.

 

Let's just start off with the fact that you haven't even bothered to stick with the order of the template and muddled everything up. I have also noticed that you have added unnecessary things to the template like "what country are you from" and "commands". Please just get rid of these. Like omg you've also left out things from the template, like "timezone", can you not go off the rails and stick to the template!!
Anyway back to the actual content of this application...

In your opinion you might call yourself "caring" and "responsible" but what do other people call you or see you as? In my opinion you aren't active (considering we both live in the UK), you aren't helpful, you aren't responsible, and seem to just enjoy having short chats on the server. Perhaps I've missed all these times you've helped and cared for others but I don't think I have missed anything, and judging by the comments on this application no one else sees you helping either. Towards the end of this little chunk of your "app", you have made some short list and ended them with 'anything' and 'etc' which just shows laziness and immense lack of detail. Stop being vague.

Firstly no one cares if it's you dream come true to become a mod. The fact you've stated that you believe you can be helpful and mature, indicates you aren't already helpful and mature but believe if you try hard enough you can but right now you aren't and probably need to try a little bit harder than you currently are. Re word all of this and change the way you act on the server if you want support. Secondly, don't say working or sorting out problems. This makes no sense and the two words pretty much mean the same thing. Just use one, thanks. Lastly, you've admitted this mod app isn't good yet still applied. Your chances of becoming a mod may have increased by 0.1% but admitting your app is BAD but going on about how it's you dream and just chucking in random things here and there isn't going to help you. So I mean...

I don't want to not not say this isn't not that good but not disagree with how not good this first sentence is. Doesn't make a whole lot of sense that does it? Just say I believe in myself even though you clearly aren't and you said your mod app is bad and you don't try very hard to help and care for others do you now? And finally, the only important things in this section you've stated is that you're "mature", "helpful", and "caring". Maybe you should re write this entire thing and add more detail if you really do care but I mean I'm not sure if you care anymore about this mod app anymore because it's only your first so it can be as bad as it wants to be. Not to be mean but the important things, I quoted ,that you think of yourself as are also complete lies. Do you help? Can I see maturity in your work? Any kind of structure? No.

This is the most useless piece of information you could ever put in a mod app. When you become a mod you'll be given the commands and things hence making all of this irrelevant.

Might want to re read this and then say 'Oh my word this makes no sense.' Do not illegally trade items such as sand or dirt or buckets etc... (Makes more sense doesn't it?)

I hate you too how dare you say that about someone else on your mod app potentially insulting people on it making you seem as "mature" and as "caring" as ever. Let's just say this isn't going to be nice from now on. I don't know what the hell you were thinking when you thought it was all ay okay to be such an a** on your app. I feel like this says a lot about you and the fact you couldn't go on mine craft for a day because of a mistake drove you to just absolutely mad about it and hating Aimee. Big Woop now get over it.

Lmao might want to re read this. Anyone else notice this?? Because I honestly do....
As far as this section goes you started with ' in my opinion' which just tells me that it's, again, what you think and no one cares.

Funny thing is....you're not a mod! :0

You know what else is funny? People are constantly asking questions and seeking help but you don't seem to help those people when you're online. Don't ask, look. When you look and find people who need help, yes even the greenbeans make sure to look out for them too, you'll find you don't need to ask but you can help the people currently asking for it. And maybe if you look real hard you'll find a Pepe too.

Well, in my opinion you are. You also dont need to say how utterly "mature" and "sophisticated" you are because we, as the reader, can see that from how you act. Which, to me, you are immature and I think you know how to improve.

No you're not responsible, never see you chatting that often let's be honest, and if you are calm and don't take things seriously you clearly seem "calm" about this by taking it oh so seriously.

Overall this is horrible and insulting and bad and you don't deserve such a position on the server. I think you know how much support I give this. (Incase you don't, there is no support)

I don't wish you good luck because you're mean and have fun with this I guess. Also if I insulted you Mae, just keep in mind you don't really care if you insult others. Sorry this is so long as well but yeah.

 

#roasted

 

How do you delete your thread? I need to delete this thread immediately because I'm getting too much hate.

 

Also Fern, yes, I may have been unnecessary by accident but Aimee spammed about 20 times:
#MaeNoMod #MaeForBan
In red. I suppose you're enjoying hating on me. I'm really surprised Aimee didn't get at least kicked for spamming, let alone being rude at the same time. 1 word.. Stupidity. Aimee and all you lot are the immature people here I'm afraid.
I'm done with this, so please don't reply and hate even more on me then you already have.

 

You think I'm stupid? Haha funny

 

As a past moderator, you have to expect that. Not everyone is going to like you, even if you are nice, hard-working, etc. There's always going to be someone who dislikes you. Whether it be someone you don't know or someone you do know, it's something that's going to happen.

Now on to the application itself:

Even if someone did something to get you banned on purpose, it's not a very good idea to say you hate them ;/ It won't set a good example for the server. If someone is bothering you, don't lash out on them and say you dislike them, you have to talk it out kindly.

In my opinion, you don't seem very mature. As Renaa has stated, you've been getting into some drama lately.

I would remove the 'Commands' and 'Skyblock Rules.' It seems rather unnecessary and is just there to make your application longer. Besides, if you're applying for mod, it's not mandatory to know all the rules/mod commands. If you become a mod, the staff team will help you learn them.

Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
You forgot to add that question into your moderator application.

Even if a player asks you a silly question, you can't just ignore them ;/ At least say, "No, sorry." It seems rather rude if you just ignore them.

I understand what you're trying to tell us, but perhaps you could reword this sentence better; it's quite confusing.

Most of all, be passionate about becoming a moderator. It's a lot more than just kicking people for spam or banning someone for illegal trading. It takes determination, hard work, and time. Don't just moderate, enjoy it. The best kind of job is something you like to do.

Please don't take this in any offensive way, as it was not intended to insult you. If I did, then I deeply apologize in advance. Good luck

 

Thanks.