Lock Me Plz!

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  1. Demon_Umbreona
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    I would like feedback on my .net island.

    It is starting to be always unlocked, so I would like to know what you think! /visit Demon_Umbreona
    If you have suggestions please post them.

    If you would like to donate some Building materials I will have a list of what I would need. If you want to just PM me through forums or tell me In-Game.

    I will post screenshots if anyone wants them.

    :{EDIT}: if the island is ever locked, then post onto here or PM me!
     
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    Screenshots pls
     
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    yass screenshotsss
     
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    I will post Screenshots as soon as I can.
     
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    Screenies! As asked for :3 2016-01-27_18.41.46.png Others!

    Banner Collection!
     
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    Guidecraft is an app that has lots of furniture, it's a little outdated but it has a lot.
     
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    I also just visited your island. It's pretty cool but it needs some more light, not everyone has /ptime :p
     
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    Ok! Thx for the info. I have FullBright on so I didn't notice. :3
     
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    I'm in the dark... Sorry about the pun what's Ptime??
     
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    You can change your time off the day

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    For example /ptime day would bring day and /ptime night would bring night, but only for your player and not the entire server
     
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    Thank you I didn't know about these mystical donor features which I don't use.
     
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    I am on fixing the Lighting! :3
    And I never knew about /ptime ...
    I am a failure of a donor ;-;
     
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    This looks pretty cool. I like the mushroom island theme.
     
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    Thank You!
     
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    Looks really cool ^-^
     
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    Thx!
     
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    Honest feedback, warning, you wanted feedback, so no need to dislike this or whatever.

    First of all, the spawn looks terrible. You spawn inside a shop, not even realizing whats above you. If you find the ladder and get up, good, you're now in a well made mushroom biome.

    Now you see a stone brick bunker (very undetailed) which has ceilings, floors, walls all out of boring stone brick. This does not mean make it into a colorful playhouse, but add detail and maybe a variation of blocks that fits to stone brick.

    Once I go outside again there's a random ice cliff that looks awkwardly too perfect for nature in the middle of the mushroom biome, but has a nice cave inside it.

    IDEAS AND TIPS:
    Give way more detail to that stonebrick thing, put some logic to the snow thing and make it seem more natrual. Also, make your spawn way better and not inside a shop. Love the mushroom biome though.

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    That was my honest feedback, I rate your island 3/10, and with that I gave you improvement tips which NO ONE has given you yet. Once you have fixed these issues you'll surely get a better rating.

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    UNHONEST FEEDBACK
    I like the island :D :D :D :) I hope you have a nice day and I love your banners
     
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    Can a mod please lock this? I don't need it here anymore but I want it for reference.
     
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