Josh_H123 Mod App

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Josh_H123, Jan 6, 2016.

  1. Josh_H123
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    Josh_H123 Member

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    Hello everyone I appreciate you spending your time reading my app
    people may know me as Skyblockian (I changed my name to josh_h123) Or Josh_H123
    I live in England Preston Pr4 0Zd
    I am English and quarter german I can speak fluently English and am learning French
    I have never be banned or temp banned
    I want to be a mod because I want people to know that I am there for them and I was once a mod I loved it until the server shut down and I want to help the new players to the server and make sure they understand our rules and have fun! then they can tell their friends and the server could be more popular I can be on the server anytime I'm needed I have been a moderator like I said until the server shut down p.s I am 13 years old and I have been bullied and if I can get one chance for anything to help the community ill give it all I have got
    Thanks For Reading, Josh
     
    Josh_H123, Jan 6, 2016
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  2. Bossgamer
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    Bossgamer Super Moderator Super Moderator

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    No Support for the moment.

    >Needs a LOT more Info.
    >Try to add more colour and space out the information a bit. (Its quite hard to read)
    >A few grammar mistakes.
    >Only seen you in-game once.
    >Never seen you in forums.
    >It asks you for your timezone, not where you live.

    But Anyway, Good Luck, this is only constructive criticism.
     
    Bossgamer, Jan 6, 2016
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  3. ReTna_SalTyyy
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    ReTna_SalTyyy Member

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    No support for these reasons
    Space it out. It is crammed and hard to read
    Underline and bold the titles
    Add some colors!
    Lacking lots of detail
    Stick to the format!
    Take more time to make it look nice.
    Read all the rules/expectations before you edit it.
    Mod is a big deal You cant just half work at or for it.
    Make it a great application and take lots of time on it.
    Also look at the ones that got accepted, And see how much info they gave everyone
    Good luck
    -ReTna_SalTyyy :p
     
    ReTna_SalTyyy, Jan 6, 2016
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  4. Brake
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    Brake Senior Member

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    Please use the correct format.
    Your in-game name:
    Which timezone are you in?
    Which languages do you speak?
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
     
    Brake, Jan 6, 2016
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  5. Holly
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    Holly Active Member

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    No support.

    A few tips I highly recommend:
    .Read other mod apps for inspiration (don't copy them though).
    .Set it out neatly (add the questions as titles for each section and spaces in-between).
    .Fix grammar mistakes.
    .Add A LOT more information and passion about becoming a mod.
    .Take your time writing this.
    .Be more active on forums (I know you got the account a long time ago, but you haven't done anything on the forums since then :p)

    If you edit this following the tips from me and others, I will give a full support! :p

    Good luck~~
     
    Holly, Jan 6, 2016
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