Thanks

 

Guess I'll bump, been almost a week.

 

Support.

 

Thanks

 

Bump, need more feedback, would love to know how I can improve

 

Ok, I have been working harder ever since I got un-banned. I have improved in-game helping and forums activity. I try to talk less to friends unless there are a lot of mods on, because I don't really want to take their job. I was wondering if some of the people who said Partial Support and had some good reasons could look at my application again and help me again. Others that gave partial credit please check as well.

 

Don't tag people or moderators especially in your application ;p

 

Ok, will remove

 

Where would you like me to add detail

 

Edited, added detail and improved the traits section

 

Partial support. It seems like you had alot of after thoughts and didn't take your time to go back fix what isn't completely accurate but other than that it's pretty good. Good luck.

 

Can you point out some spots?

 

No hard feelings or anything but like when you said you're always on but when it says how long can you be active a day you said 6 hours here and there. Again no hard feelings just trying to help you out.

 

There's more but I'm kinda lazy.

 

More details under the qualifications maybe add some of the other tabs such as dedicated to make room for more information. I will give an 80% support although i think some of the tabs are a little too small and you do go off topic at times. Good luck.

 

Sorry, I will edit that part

 

Can you point out some times where I go off-topic?

 

Under the I try to be unabiased where you talk about your school and also the mature section where you talk about how you have matured faster because of your family. and also try to find more examples for patient because you are basically listing 1 thing you can wait while someone types. Not trying to be rude just trying to help

 

I didn't think you were trying to be rude. As for the mature section, I have read other applications on which people say they are mature, but don't really act it, so I wanted to help people understand a bit more about me and why I consider myself mature. I will add more to being patient. Thank you for your opinion.

 

No problem