Thanks

On a side note, congratulations you're the 100th reply xD

 

Veil gluck

 

Tankyew c:

 

bumpp ^-^

 

I've never seen you ingame?

 

Timezones, then. You're on the other side of the world for me lol. I'm on daily, so no reason to not find me online c:

 

Bump

 

Awe thank you Lem

 

you're an alt. so no.

 

Of whom? I don't have any accounts other than this one. Nor do I understand where this sudden assumption is appearing from. So if I could have an explanation and an answer to that, that'd be great.

 

Also I don't care that you doodle, I don't know why you added the last part. That didn't enhance your application. In fact, it probably let down your app as it says you can't stay on task for a certian amount of time...

 

I put it in as a thing about me, as another word for drawing. You're assuming things about people. I'm pretty on task at all times, if I must remind you that it is a video game, so I'm playing it for my entertainment, giving me no reason to go off-task.

If that's how you feel, your opinion is always appreciated. Thank you. And I changed the word, to avoid further confusion.

 

Ayy, 2 months. Lmao.

Anyway, added some more, and if any mistakes are seen in the application, please let me know. Thanks in advance.

 

It was brief and descriptive, give us a little more about yourself though. Otherwise, I would love to see you on the team.

 

I didn't wish to get too off-topic with myself on the application, however there's a link to my introduction somewhere in the beginning, if you'd like to get to know me a bit more.

Thank you

 

Alright lets do this.

I like your application, it's very detailed and straight to the point, however I found some mistakes that was present in it, for example:

a. "Hellooo my fellow skyblock players! Welcome to my application, I guess?"
I mean you are making this application yourself, why did you have to put in "I guess".

b. "I have been taking Spanish for about 7 years now"
So does that mean you're fluent or what?

c. "Race, color, nationality, likes and dislikes, you name it, and it won't come to my mind as mod."
I mean we're playing Minecraft, it's not like we're seeing face to face, however if you intend this as a statement based on a metaphor then it's fine.

d. "I guess you can call me a grammar freak."
That's a complete paradox to this statement, "A complete stranger, he was."
Unless you're very hyped to the Star Wars movie and became Yoda then I'm fine with it.

Good luck.

 

a. Put in "I guess" as an unsure way of whether welcoming introductions is a thing or not xD But it's been removed now.

b. Also added in just for confirmation.

c. Meant as a metaphor haha.

d. Also removed because felt unnecessary.

Thank you for your feedback.

 

Support

Good luck

 

Thank you ^-^

 

Bumpp