[USA] MiniMan460's App

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by MiniMan460, Oct 8, 2015.

  1. MiniMan460
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    Intro

    Hello i'm MiniMan460 i would be happy to be a mod :)
    i'm going to fill out the template and tell you other stuff on why i should be a mod

    Whats my IGN:
    MiniMan460 (prefer to be called the_info_yoshi)

    What time zone am i in:
    The USA timezone

    What language do i speak:
    English (learning spanish)

    Have I ever been banned?:
    Yes, because of funds

    Why do I think i should be a mod?:
    I want to help people out and get rid of hackers
    i really think i can help get rid the hackers because i have been seeing allot lately and i want to not see them and illegal trades are becoming more common now i don't wanna see those i was trying to help people on the server and someone asked me for a bucket i did tell them to get a bucket back you have to reset your island

    How long do you stay on the server everyday:
    2 Hours or more i cant really say much else

    Have you ever had a past experience as a mod?:
    No but i wish i did this will be my first time

    What donor am i?:
    I am donor 100

    What is my favorite thing to do on the server?:
    My favorite thing to do on the server is to kill mobs and do skin contests

    whats my nickname?:
    the_info_yoshi

    Whats the grammer i use?:
    My skin is a robot i will add some dots and z's sometimes but most of the time i'm going to use normal grammer

    Am i mature:
    Yes i will type in chat swear words if they are allowed however i do not know if they are allowed so i do not say them

    Do i think this app has a chance:
    not very much

    do i have a program to chat with other staff:
    not at the moment i dont plan on getting a program to chat with other staff either



    I want this to be noticed and accepted and i think i have a chance and i will try to do my best
    to help the server be in a good condition!

    If i do get accepted the first thing i'm going to do is look for some hackers because i do need to pay attention to those and i know i'm not suppose to but i'm going to say thing just to keep you informed I WILL NOT ABUSE THIS!
     
    Last edited: Oct 11, 2015
  2. Calidre
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    Calidre Experienced Member

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    No support. App lacks much detail and you don't help out much.

    Good Luck :)
     
  3. MiniMan460
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    i cant really think about what to put in it i even read other posts
     
  4. CJ_Plays_Games
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    Add more detail, fix grammar, and capitalization errors. Also try to get used to the forums/server before applying for mod. You seem to be newer here, so just give it time and edit this when you can. Neutral for now. I will be watching for improvement on this application, and for you to be helping in game/on the forums.
     
  5. CJ_Plays_Games
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  6. Mai
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    Mai serendipity Discord Moderator Discord Administrator Premium Premium

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    App lacks detail, Never seen you on, meaning I've never seen you helping. Neutral for now. Improve and I'll boost up my support
     
    Last edited: Oct 9, 2015
  7. BookWorm101
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    You need to add some more detail to your application, and fix up the grammar. Good luck.
     
  8. Pizza
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    Pizza Experienced Member

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    Take a look at applications that have worked and been accepted in the past. Don't emulate or copy them, but they can give you a better sense of what you need to write about.
     
  9. MiniMan460
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    thanks for informing me on that that was really helpful :)
     
  10. Wolf_Fang_44
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    Wolf_Fang_44 Well-Known Member

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    No support, for now.
    CJ basically hit everything that needs work, improve your grammar and add more detail, also, go back and look at how you worded the beginning of 'why I should be a mod', you said that you wanted to help hackers :p please fix that, if you can't figure out what else to put, just keep searching. Look at some mod applications that have been approved, that might help.
     
  11. Wolf_Fang_44
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    No support, for now.
    CJ and Pizza basically hit everything that needs work, improve your grammar and add more detail, also, go back and look at how you worded the beginning of 'why I should be a mod', you said that you wanted to help hackers :p please fix that, if you can't figure out what else to put, just keep searching. Look at some mod applications that have been approved, that might help.
     
  12. MiniMan460
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    i did not say i will help hackers did you misread it says i want to help people out and get rid of hackers
     
  13. Wolf_Fang_44
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    Wolf_Fang_44 Well-Known Member

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    Underneath it, it says "I really think I can help the hackers" :p
     
  14. MiniMan460
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    lol just noticed that thanks for mentioning
     
  15. Wolf_Fang_44
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    No problem XD
     
  16. Cooper12443!
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    Cooper12443! Active Member

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    No support need more detail :D

    Good luck on mod.
     
  17. LivingShadow
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    LivingShadow Experienced Member

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    No Support.
    Add more info.
    Try helping out more.
    Be more active, and help out more in the forums, since you only have a few messages.
    Good Luck :)
     
  18. Wolf_Fang_44
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    Capitalize your I's and check your spelling, go more into detail, especially for the why I should be a mod part, and also maybe a little with the ban part. Did you learn from your mistakes? Is there anything else you have done that could possibly be against the rules? And be honest about it, it's better to be honest than to lie. Finally, the what donor am I, favourite things to do on the server, grammar you use, do you think this app has a chance and can you communicate with other mods all have no meaning, you don't need them there and they're taking up space where you could put things like traits.
     
    Last edited: Oct 12, 2015
  19. MiniMan460
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    im not even going to bother anymore im not going to be a mod so im just going to stop trying
     
  20. xWolfite
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    No Support
    Reasons Stated Above.
     

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