Moderator Application for Skyblock.net

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by LOL_Jacob1, May 14, 2015.

  1. LOL_Jacob1
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    Your in-game name: LOL_Jacob1

    Which languages do you speak? English

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?) Yes, I thought I could take an item (cobblestone) out of a Mod's chest, oops! Didn't know any better. Now I do.

    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    Motive:
    I should be a Mod because I would enjoy helping other people. It is like paying it forward. I would like to do that because I know how it feels to need help, trust me. I've been raided 3 times and have been looted once.

    What a Mod is:
    A Mod is about having the ability to help people and maybe even other mods. It means that you need to help people move forward throughout their journey and maybe even yours.

    What a Mod is NOT:
    Knowing that a Mod isn't just someone that can do whatever he/she wants including be a jerk to everyone. That's not what Mod is about.

    Experience:
    I've been installing software since I was 4 years old! Computers have always been accessible for me. In my Minecraft gaming experience, I've logged 8-9 years; had my own server,
    watched many videos, taught myself how to code in Minecraft and work redstone really well
    I go to school, run my own business, and love computers; video games.

    Summary:
    Although I'm just a young teenager, I would love the chance to be a Mod. It would be a great experience. I would do a great job. I would be fair and just. Thank you for your consideration.
    LOL_Jacob1


    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Weekdays (School Days) 2-3 hours / per day
    Weekends 4 hours /per day
     
    Last edited: May 22, 2015
  2. Love__
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    Love__ Well-Known Member

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    This application has a lot of grammatical mistakes. I font see you in-game very often. Nor do I see you in the forums. You seen quite immature for your age, but who knows I could be wrong. This application is lacking information try adding more to the "why I should be Mod" section. Try adding some color, to really grab the readers attention. No support for now. Make some changes and I might support later on. Good Luck!
     
  3. LOL_Jacob1
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    I added about 3-4 more sentences to the App.
     
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    Try not underlineling every single sentence. And don't add color to every single word, since it makes it hard to read.
     
  5. ServerReviewer
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    Not to be rude but this application is unorganized very short and looks like a 9 year old wrote it, try revising your application moderator does not come easy
     
  6. LOL_Jacob1
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    in specific that I need to fix?
     
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    Does that look good Love__?
     
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    Does that look good Love__?
     
  9. LOL_Jacob1
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    Hello anybody? Love__
     
  10. LivingShadow
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    You need much, much more details.
    Add a little color, but don't bomb them with colors.
    Try to organize it a little better.
    Read some of the other mod application (you can take a look at mine's if you want) to kind of get an idea on how to write it.
    Good Luck! :)
     
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  11. LOL_Jacob1
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    Thanks for the suggestions. Hopefully this exceeds your standards.

    -LOL_Jacob1
     
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    Hey, since I have been working on this a lot, can you tell other people just to stop by leave suggestions? Thanks

    -LOL_Jacob1
     

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