[USA] leadermelody's mod application [.net]

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  1. leadermelody
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    Before I begin, thank you for taking the time to read this and telling me what mistakes I made. I appreciate all negative and positive comments because it all helps me the more I read the comments the better my application becomes. Once again thank you and please comment what you think of it truthfully.

    About me

    I love this server it was one of my favorite servers that I still play on. I am a very nice person if you get to know me well. If you don't know me well I still am nice but I talk a bit more to people I get to know better than people that just say hi to me and ask me to help and just say bye. My friends started playing minecraft so I was like why not? Me and my friends all wanted to play skyblock so we went on google searching up ''Good Skyblock Servers'' and we found this server. We had so much fun on this server together. We used to be greenbeans and the first day I did not know how to make a crafting table and 5 days later I opened up my inventory and placed the wood in the slots and I was like ohh. I love talking to people in /msg I like it better than talking in the chat since people spam too much. I would take off the chat it's just I want to talk to my friends and I'm helping people. I love the color blue. Anything that is blue I want it. I love pocky :heart: pocky is delicous go try it . :3 I also love sushi alot of people I know hate it though because it has raw fish. I love anime and singing. I love singing more than anything else.

    Your in game name

    My in-game name is leadermelody. Also my nick in game and in real life is Melly.

    Which time zone are you in?

    Not sure i dont know how to check but I am in Southern California currently. I was born in Oregon and I go to Spain and Washington during my vacations. In Spain I don't have Internet so I can't log on SB but there is a good chance I will. I think I'm in PST UTC

    -8:00

    What languages do you speak?

    I speak English and Spanish. I might learn Japanese though. My friends are planning to go to Japan so we all want to learn Japanese.

    Have you ever been banned (if yes,why)?

    No, I have never been banned. If I was ever banned I wouldn't have made this. It would be bad if someone thought that this girl has been banned before and gives you less support.

    Why do you think you should get mod?

    I think I should be a mod because if I was mod I could help people. When I am usually online there are no mods maybe once in a while. So if someone gets griefed or scammed I help them as much as I can in /msg. I do not give stuff away i only do that to people who have Been griefed or scammed so they can repair stuff. I do that so they won't have to worry about the lost items.

    If I was a mod I would treat everyone with respect. It wouldn't matter if they have ranks. We are all the same in some way. People dont really care about greenbeans because they dont have ranks. I have talked to many greenbeans before and most of them are nicer than the donors I met. I have been checking ban appeals to see what people can get banned for. I also see that people have mentioned their rank probably thinking I donated so Im gonna get unbanned! They might have just lowered their chances. For those of you thinking well I have never seen you online and never seen you help. I help in /msg and I don't talk in chat usually only when a friend is online. If I talk too much in chat I get spammed. People message me like where do you use voter crate keys. Where do you get iron, diamonds, gold, and grass. Or tell me they got griefed. I'll answer them and tell them as much as I know to help them on Sky Block.

    I know the rules and I know what is bannable. I know most of the commands for a mod as I have been on a server that gave me creative because I was a friend it was never considered mod for us though as we just used it to kick each other for fun as they all started doing it.
    How long can you be active on the server every day?

    I can be on at least 2-4 hours every day and 2 hours on forums every day during the day. I can be on more than that if needed. I am usually on forums at night on my iPod for 3-4 hours every day I absolutely love the forums. I love reading more than anything else in the world. well maybe except for music and Skyblock.

    Mini schedule
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    Sunday:
    7:00pm- 9:00pm
    Monday-Wednesday:
    6:00pm-8:00pm
    Thursday:
    4:00pm-6:00 pm
    Friday:
    4:00pm-9:00pm
    Saturday:
    6:00pm-8:00 pm (maybe more depending on what I am doing)

    Dedicated
    I am dedicated to this sever. I am addicted/dedicated to skyblock. I will be online everyday. Even if something happens I will probably be on 30 minutes if something happens and I have to go.

    Trustworthy

    I am trustworthy I wouldn't do anything bad to people if I did it would probably on accident. I wouldn't try to do anything bad.

    Grammar

    My grammar is okay but It is not the best. I am good at writing essays at school but I am not very good at writing stuff like this.

    Mature

    I am very immature with my friends but if something is important I will take it seriously. I would take things seriously. I wouldn't be very immature with friends sometimes. I have seen people griefing before I try to take a screenshot.. It's too late I would report it but I don't have any proof.. If I was a mod I could ban all of the people I see griefing instead of waiting and having no logs.

    Friendly

    I am very friendly I love helping. I don't like being rude or seeing other people being rude. It just makes me mad.

    Trustworthy

    I am very trustworthy. I would not steal or scam another player. I see people doing it all the time. I always put my items in the chest first if people don't trust me. I have never scammed anyone that would just be mean.

    Helpfulness

    If someone gets griefed and there are no logs I will help rebuild the parts that where destroyed.

    Fairness

    I treat people fairly no matter what rank they are. Everyone is the same in some way. It doesn't matter if someone donated or not it's their choice really and you don't have to pay to play skyblock.

    Kindness
    I am very kind to other players and love playing with other people. I treat all players with respect. I love messaging other players when I am not busy. I get to make new friends like that. That's how I met most of my friends.

    Observant

    I am very observant. I could see a person in game from far away. I have gotten griefed before and what happened was I did /home and I saw someone in the building griefing. When they saw me they left so I wouldn't get a screenshot of them. I did get a screen shot but it wasn't proof of them griefing.

    Activity Online
    I am online most of the time at night because of school. On saturdays I am usually on during the day because there is not any school. On Sundays I am on during the night because during the day on Sundays we go for a walk. I am active on .net so don't tell me I'm not active just because you have never seen me online before. Do /seen leadermelody or ask a skygod to do /seen leadermelody.
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?

    I have had past experience as a moderator but we never really considered it as mod. Me and my friends were all in creative and we just started messing around with commands (which I would never do on SB). Also I have just gotten mod on my friends server (which took me months to get mod on) so I am learning all of the comands.


    *Note: I am still fixing mistakes and adding more things and also please tell me what to fix.

     
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  2. Jolie
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    Mkay

    - well first off, putting "immature" as a quality isn't a good thing...
    - you are a new member of the forums, we need more experienced members.
    - I have never seen you before on the forums or in-game

    Now for future reference, to help make your application better I suggest:

    - adding some color to it, just nothing to bright & not too much
    - to bold and/or underline your titles
    - searching your timezone on google
    - add more detail to the why you want to be a mod section
    - input more (and more persuasive, but at the same time truthful) qualities

    But overall no support a of yet-until further notice of changes
    goodluck c:

    cheers xx
     
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    thank you for your suggestions
     
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    I actually have been online it's just i have just learned how to make an account for fourms
     
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    it's still rather best if people applying for mod have forum experience too
     
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    I'll start with a few tips for the application:
    1. Bold & color your titles, so it's easier to view.
    2. Calling yourself immature ain't really appealing XD
    3. Add much, much more details in each of the sections
    4. You should check your timezone first, before you write the application
    As for your activity, please be more active on the forums - you've only joined just recently. I won't ramble on about in-game issues, since you're a greenie, in a different timezone. Thus, I cannot support you for now...good luck though~ ;)

    Edit: Jolie, damn~ You beat me to it while I was AFK...XD
     
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    ha :t
     
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    lol XD
     
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    just be more active on the forums too k ;)
     
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    Okay :3
     
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    I suggest you add more detail.
     
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    I added a bit more to It : )
     
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    25/100

    You rarely help.
    Add lots of more detail.
    Bold//Color your questions.
    Add color and be creative!~
    Also, be a bit more mature.

    ~Good luck.
     
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    I help when people msg me if people msg me I Get thier attention since I rarley talk in chat :3 i Also can not add color since Im on my iPod and It would take forever and i am still writing this
     
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    At this point, I'm satisfied with the amount of details. However, a lot of organisation / format work needs to be done, in my opinion. Of course, the content is always the most important. However, the looks of the application also has a great impact on the viewers' thoughts. It shows the person's personalities, organisation skills, neatness & sometimes even maturity. The first thing most viewers would look at is how the application is written as a whole, and you gotta take that into account. (First impression's always very important)

    Here're a few tips to make your application look more professional & appealing:
    • Bold, italic and/or color (Don't use them all) your section titles and sub-titles (Ex. 'Grammer')
    • Make the paragraphs aligned to one side (Preferably left). Getting them all centred may look very unprofessional to some people. (Including myself ;))
    • Don't randomly capitalise the start of some words. It doesn't look so good.
    • Even out your spacings. Right now, some parts are spaced apart by 1, 2 & sometimes stuck together. I suggest you keep an even spacing of 1 line. ;)
    • When you're listing things, start a new line like this (Right now, you're just doing: 1. Something 2. Something else 3. Another thing, etc.):
    1. Blah blah
    2. Blah blah blah
    3. Blah blah
    • For your 'Amount of time online' section, it is suggested/requested by the majority of the people that you provide an approximate time you can be online on each day (Ex. Monday: 2-4 Hours).
    As for your content, I'm happy about the effort you put into it in your latest edit. Maybe rephrase some of your sentences, as they can be a little confusing. Overall, I'll give you a 60% support (From my previous 0%) for the effort you've put in then for your edit. I also got to know you over time and you seem like a very friendly person. I'll expand on these points once your application is edited so it looks neater. Good luck~! ;)
     
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    I was writing this on my iPod so it isn't very neat gonna fix it tommorrow
     
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    Great to hear! Tag me when you've completed all editing. :')
     
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    Okay
     
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