This looks like an application that was spent 5-10 minutes on. Fix your grammar, use punctuation, spell correctly, and put time into this.
coco - not to be mean, but making 8 of these with this quality could take 10 minutes. Work on your spelling, like I said, tell the readers why YOU should be chosen over anyone else. If you make more than 1 application in a month or so, the staff will automatically deny you. Since you have made 8, and your app is very bad, I give you no support. Look here for an amazing mod app that was accepted.
wot m8? On-topic. Coco, as I have read your past posts. You seem as if you need to work on your grammar and make a better application. If just gonna say it, at this rate, it's not going to be accepted. If you decide to straighten your back, and spell correctly, this application is not going to be accepted. Also, if you misssed something in your application, edit it. If someone gives you feedback, use it. Sometimes the truth isn't what you want.