Next time just ask a staff member to remove the messages. Partial Support, Pros: -You are active. -You adjust to feedback. Cons: -You keep deleting and re-posting your application, it gets very hard for people. -You aren't that active on the forums from what I've seen. Best of luck!
Neutral > Lots of grammar mistakes. > Somehow I feel you just need to wait a little bit to mature a little more. > Cut down on the colours, it hurts my eyes, only use it for questions, subtitles, etc. > Space out the "Why I want to be Mod" section a tiny bit. > I rarely see you on Forums, just maybe reply to things more. > Also maybe add an extra half an hour or two, as a Mod needs to be active. > The Extra information is not needed. However considering you can fluently speak Spanish along with English, and you are learning to speak other languages, this could be important to players who do not speak English. Also it looks like you have took the time to write this. Good Luck
Thanks So much CoolCreeper20202 Thanks Boss Also I tried to fix as many mistakes as I could and I changed the colour to purple and Spaced "Why I want to be Mod Out" More .
I think it looks much better, I just don't know if you are mature enough yet. Once I get to know you some more, i'll post my opinion.
Ducky, you do have a great app here, but you really need to stop making multiple apps. There is an edit button if need be. I do have to say that this is a well written application and it seems that you spent a lot of time in this. I do think that the purple is a little killer on the eyes. I had to look away several times before I could read all the way through it. I will give you 50% support since you have had done multiple apps. One word of advice luv please listen to your peers . . when they say stop making new apps. . If you keep making them it is going to send the wrong message to people that you can not handle yourself. So please work with the one you have now. With that I do believe that it is a lot better and well written, just no more making apps. . . Great job.
40% support Pros and Cons stated by other players ~On a side note Ducky please don't delete this application. Just edit this one.
Partial support. Application wise: -Grammatical/Spelling errors -Very detailed and organized In-game wise: -Decently active -Help out more, on forums as well You're doing great so far, just work on these things . Good Luck~
I'll have to say no support. First of all, do not say mods names in your application. Second, 8th application and counting. I've told you in every one of your applications to use the edit button. Your chance of getting mod keeps getting lower and lower because of all the applications you make. You're 11 turning 12, right? If so, in positive you've learned about spelling and grammar before. You don't want AgentGrammarPolice to come in don't you? If you do, you'll have a lot of editing to do. Fourth* (that was my third), don't advertise your application on your profile. You're allowed to, but it makes you seem hopeless and like you're begging for supports. Fifth, what happened to the "I'm going to wait 1 year" thing you said in your last application?!?! I'm positive I'm not in 6th grade yet. Let me check. Birth date, 2005 on April 22. Nope! It says I'm still 10 and not 11. Sixth, I don't think you're really mature. Sure you help online and are a bit active, but is that being mature? I'm 99.9% sure you don't become mature by being active. It does show you like to come online, but as I said, I'm 99.9% sure it doesn't count as maturity. Seventh, after you've deleted 1, 2, 3... 7 applications (grats on your 8th), you still have the same exact application. Just with bold, a different color, and at least 5 more sentences. I'd think you'd be mature enough to actually make a new application and start fresh (USING THE EDIT BUTTON). But I guess you were the opposite of how I thought you were. Eighth, you say you can be active for a while (yet you skipped that part of the format and change many, many things) but I see you on for 5-10 minutes every other day. I'm on a lot in the afternoon (4:15 - 8:20 while I take 30 minute breaks inbetween). Even during my small breaks, if I were to do /seen SuperDuckyx it would've said that you were last seen 1 day ago or 8 hours ago. Ninth, please take all of the unnecessary information out of your application as it makes you look like you didn't have enough information for each area. As a wise guy once told me in my application (creds to whoever it was), quality > quantity. In case you don't know what that means, it means you should have a good short application rather then a long bad application. If I see anything else I would like to point out to you, I'll be sure to do so. As I said above, no support. ~Agent (Typed on my phone)
Ok Agent Thanks for all of this but, Will you like to see screenshots of how active I am?? I will start posting how active I am every day I wi even show you when I help people.Also this is a redo application as people spammed my last 1, and as well as I am mature not by just being active but by being respectful and kind to all. Did you realize how hard I worked on my application as well? I'm fixing it everyday and you say that I only put 5 new sentences. I hope you put this into consideration