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Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by 1THEDANSTER1, Jan 16, 2016.

  1. 1THEDANSTER1
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    1THEDANSTER1 Member

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    Your in-game name:1THEDANSTER1
    Which timezone are you in? Britan
    Which languages do you speak? English French
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?) yes for typing the same command to many times
    Why do you think you should be a mod? because im friendly I could help the server so much and I could enforce the rules
    How long can you be active on the server every day? 8-9 hours a da
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator? no I don't but I am a donor50 and I want people to have fun on the server and not be hurt be bad language/scams
     
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  2. Nena
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    Nena Experienced Member

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    Add a lot more detail. Being a donor doesn't affect your chances, don't include it.

    I will give actual advice, when this application has improved.
     
  3. Fell_In_Lava
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    Personal Note:

    You will need to review your definition of 'Detail' when it comes to creating a moderator application such as this. May I suggest that you look at other moderator applications (Accepted). I relation to looking at accepted moderator applications, I wouldn't copy as this is extremely frowned upon.

    Use the template to your advantage:

    Important! - Mod Application template - Read before posting | Skyblock Forums
     
  4. Cheesy
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    Cheesy Senior Member

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    Add a lot more detail.
    Get more active on the forums
    Seen you once online but not helping other people
    No Support
     
  5. Myrmidous
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    Myrmidous Well-Known Member Premium

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    Nice to see you again, Dan. Let's see how you've improved since your last session about an hour ago.

    Pleasure to meet you, Danster. That's a very enthusiastic name, kind of feels like I should be shouting it out loud whenever I read it. I'd like to ask, though: Why the '1's on the ends? Are they meant to be goalposts...?

    That is not a time zone. That isn't even a country. Did you mean to put something like "UTC+0"?

    You speak English French? That is actually a real language, it's a dialect called "patois". It's a mix of English, French and a lot of West African slang. If you've ever seen "The Waterboy" or "Joe Dirt" both films have a character rambling in that "language". It's very difficult to understand.

    Unless you just forgot a comma between the two languages?

    Was it "COME TO MY SKIN COMP PLZ! FEE 2 GRASS"?

    Pretend I'm a starving third world child and your application is the only thing I can eat today. Fill it out. Put meat on it. Give us the juicy and wonderful little bits we delight in, but cut out the fatty useless parts. When your application is a feast to consume and leaves us begging for more only then will you be successful.

    You didn't even bother finishing the sentence. Did your friend distract you on Destiny halfway through typing your application, sir?

    Sometimes money can't buy what you want. For everything else there's ModCard™

    Some thoughts:
    Your application has less dedication than a narcoleptic goldfish. Spend a little more time filling out the sections and giving a bit more information, Danster. Or not--entirely up to you.

    It feels a little like you were going through as quickly as you could just to toss this out there. Some people have no-nonsense, bare minimum information format and do quite well for themselves. That doesn't seem to be your "style"; you're more like a "shotgun multiple applications until they give up in horror" kind of approach. You don't even finish a couple sentences.

    Review, rewrite, add more, browse other applications for inspiration sir. Good luck.

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  6. Quantieee
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    Quantieee Well-Known Member

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    No Support!
    ~ Not Active online/Forums
    ~ Help more in-game
    ^Timezone
    ~ Lack of information
    ~ To much Bold
     
  7. iballisticbunny6
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    iballisticbunny6 Senior Member

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    No support
    - Just joined forums
    - Not enough information
    - Use correct template
     
  8. EGirl900
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    Try adding more detail
     

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