full support!

 

Support. You were a great Moderator. Good luck.

 

Full Support

 

You proved yourself a great moderator in the past, and although inactive for a time, you had a worthy excuse. Your application is rather well written in my opinion, and it perfectly matches your attitude toward helping out in game. Full support, I'd love to see you on the team again.

 

Good luck

 

Support Good luck

 

Thank you all for the good luck wishes

 

Personal Note:
- Being demoted will drag you back a few steps and unfortunately people will pick up on this fact. However, I went through the application without that fact to impact my judgment.

Advantages:
- Right off the bat, I see no colour which is a positive note in my book, it expresses the fact that you want nothing to do with physical attraction, you want readers to dive in and make sure they judge you on your ability to write an application! (My opinion)
- The structure was generally good, with a few spaces needed here and there, however the use of bold text to separate your points is looked upon with praise. It give the application a more profession look.

Disadvantages:
- Attributes okay to add, but they are what a mod should have in the first place. I'd assume you wouldn't apply if you didn't think you posses them already. Given that some moderators may yet have to learn some of these characteristics, it doesn't change the fact that before applying, players must ask themselves if they have what it takes personally.
- Humble is something that I'd find to be an asset when writing an application such as this. I would edit out 'though rarely humble' as it doesn't make sense at all. The way that you've expressed this word is saying that you value your importance over others. (I realise this is not what you meant).
- No personal information on how you'd try and make a difference uniquely, I really enjoy seeing what people have to say when it comes to wanting to make a difference on a server. I realise that players aspire to be like already existing Administrators or Moderators. However, being yourself and making a difference through who you are, I value more than being like someone else.

Suggestions:
- Iron out some of the grammatical errors as they make is slightly more difficult to read the application.
- Add more detail about you, and less about what a mod should be. As I've already stated, I don't think you would have applied if you didn't think you had what it takes.

 

Support.
Good luck bud

 

Hey man, thank you for the criticism. However, I do believe being humble is far from an asset when applying for anything, because it shows a belief that somebody would be better in my position. I added attributes that I own, not ones a moderator should have. There are very few grammatical mistakes within my writing that I can spot, however I am not an amazing writer. Furthermore, my demotion should not really determine people's view of me, since it was not due to any form of abuse; inactivity was the only cause for my loss of rank. Thank you for the criticism and I will revise my application in order to mkae some points a little clearer.

 

Please look up the definition of humble.

 

having or showing a modest or low estimate of one's importance - doesn't sound highly positive in an app to me man

 

Being modest is a fairly decent attribute to have, it means that even though you know you've achieved well, or completed something to a fantastic standard. You do not show off, you mealy say thank you.

Being humble means that you value others more than yourself, therefore is a good characteristic.

 

Okay dude...

 

Bump>>

 

Support

 

I got you +1 Pixie

 

100% support, and good luck.

 

Support!!
Good Luck