1. Let's not start a flame war, just use the feedback among your application to improve it.

2. There are some unnecessary words/sections in your application.

3. I love how you organized and structured your application to make it look professional, but try to make it sound professional.

These are my opinions on what you can fix, I'm going to leave you with a good luck.

Yours truly,
Layla

 

1. Ok
2. Where?
3. Thank you!
4. Good Luck sounds great!

 

That kind of response was honestly rude because not only was that confusing, even after reinstating no support you fail to give him a reason


-Chrix32

 

...I'm not required to give a reason. I don't support because I don't think she'd be a good mod.

 

Ok. Are you on .ORG or .NET?

 

I'm a net nub.

Inb4 you ask to see me in game -
Nty, don't wanna get on >~>

 

So we don't get too off topic, I'll say 70% Support. Application is very well written!

 

Thank you! I am glad to see that!

 

Ok. I respect you telling the truth. I loved when you said I will work hard. I will. I will come on later after dance and I would like to see you again. I will add in my app to show why I'm special. Thank you for you advice.

 

1st Bump

 

thats so unnecessary.

EDIT: After some extensive reading on ''Why I should be a [Mod]" I have come across things which I think not relevant to why you should be a mod. Instead putting your life story there, you should just write infallible facts about you.

best of luck

 

Although you are 10 and you seem very mature.. Sometimes things can get way out of hand while moderating. It might push you to become angrier & do things you'll regret.
No support.

 

Yeah ^

 

Ok. I don't think that I will get very angry but if others believe that I respect the opinion.

I put my life story of how I found the server at the top. I wrote some facts there. I believe I will respect everyone if I was mod but I may joke around a bit. Though, I will always help. I really enjoy hearing everyone's opinion. Thank you all.

 

in that "Why I believe I should be [Mod] " doesnt even explain how you came across to the server, or even relevant of what your goal is trying to do; you should just delete that whole section.

 

Please keep this on topic

 

Also when people put "No Support" instead of saying "Ok" you should actually put thought into your reply.

Never ever get in an argument over what someone says. If someone says "No Support" and they give you a reason that you don't agree with, don't try and question them. They have their reason, let it be.

^^ This isn't neeeded either. If you want the job, you need to be prepared for people who don't see eye to eye with you.

 

I explained already that in the beginning I stated that. Others didn't mind it. I really think that having that is ok. And could you state where the unnecessary part is? The section.

 

Alright. I just try to be nice with everyone so I guess I should try to ask others to give more detail. Thank you for this.

 

the whole "Why I believe I should be [Mod]" is unnecessary