[UK] | Ghasklin | Mod Application | [NET]

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  1. Calidre
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    Support :) You put a lot of effort into it and your very active

    Good Luck
     
  2. Ghasklin | LewLew
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    Oh, Okay Thanks!
     
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    Thanks Ashura!
     
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    Thanks Art!
     
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    I never see you online (Timezones maybe) and never helping. Even though you may help in /msg, try to help in public chat more often. Just don't spam the chat. And, as far as I can see, you need to tone down the colors, hm? Try to bold the questions but not the answers. And more about your application, is there anything you need to work on and such? Do you have enough time to be legitimately prepared for a moderator position? And, my dear, you do not seem excited at all. Up the optimistic! Next, your mod app needs some work. I spotted grammatical errors, no punctuation, unnecessary Capitalizations,etc. please try your best to edit your application, as a method. You can start with a rough draft of your application then see what others may think of it then, then next you can improve it and get more support, which means more likeliness of you becoming a mod. My next piece of advice, try to cramp everything together, but not too much. It looks like an attempt to lengthen your application. Finally, about your 'Mature' trait column. Tell us, (this is optional), how old you are and how it may affect your maturity. If you're only 9 and super-mature, you have a way better chance of becoming mod than most. It just screams "Making me mod is for the better good, I'm active and social. I'm mature and only 9 years old! I sometimes goof off with friends, but I'm working on that." See my example (Credit--not taken from another application) and how it explains that they have something to work on, but they're still listing they're good traits? So, tell us, have you ever goofed off with friends or raged? We all do that sometimes, nobody's perfect. Remember: being a mod is about being honest and proving you are worthy to helping the server grow. When people only just figure out your bad traits such as raging, they will have a bad taste in their mouth and you will earn a demote. This is why some people list things they can work on, like me. I make novel paragraphs. :)
     
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    Alright, Hold on. I'm on all the time go ask anyone, Okay? I don't seem Excited, god damn I am and telling me If I have enough time of course I do. Okay? I never see you on so it is due to timezones, You said this: punctuation, unnecessary Capitalizations,etc. (p)lease try your best to edit your now you have nothing to say. You do not know how much time I put into this application if it is due to timezones LOOK AT MY TIMEZONE ON MY MOD APP? IS IT DIFFERENT? So, Thank you. I know that being a mod is about being Honest, Wait no it's not it's about Helping a player when it's needed. Honesty is only needed when you're making the mod app. Thank you. Bye.
     
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    Did you actually read my mod application? hm?
     
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    Hi Ghask, Full support eith you, your always active, and you help people, kinda, caring exc.. Good luck! :heart:
     
  9. Ghasklin | LewLew
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    Thanks Kat!
     
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    You seem immature and you raged at my support quote. It seems to me that you are desperate for mod, because I was hoping that you would become a mod. But no. You need to tone down the colors, you have unnecessary capitalizations, and you forgot some punctuation in at least four places. I honestly know an 11 year old that's more mature than you. She could at least reply with "Thanks for the feedback" or "Thanks for at least 68% support!", unlike you. You have offended me greatly, as I just gave some pieces of advice. I told you to fix them, and I doubt you even read through my quote. And when someone gives you support, you just reply with a "Thanks!", doesn't that seem unfair? and the "50% support" where you replied with Okay Will do. c; Thanks for the support." What the nuggets? You were friendly to them, but not me? What have I ever done to you?" And, you know, I don't stand out from other people. And you don't seem to have enough detail in your "Why do you think you should be a mod?" section. All you are listing are your good traits. Is there anything you need to work on, is there a certain reason you want to be a moderator? By the way, you should be honest about your traits. I found some of them untrue.

    A second reason I lowered support: (Other supporters should read this)
    You say that honesty only applies in your mod application. It certainly does not. You see how I am giving you less than partial support and being honest? You think that you only need to be honest in your mod app? So you would lie to the server without hesitation? Consider what you are saying. To me, at this moment now, you seem unfit for the position. You have potential in my opinion. Why did you even reply with that sassy message? I wouldn't have lowered my support, because I was testing how you would react and I would make my support higher; 50%. As soon as I saw you helping out, I thought you had potential. And, true enough, you don't seem to have it anymore in my opinion.

    Oh and yes, I did read through the application. Tone down the colors and add detail to the "Why you want to be a moderator" section. There has to be a certain reason you would like to be a moderator. (Hate commenters will be be ignored, in-game and on the forums. Hate is not accepted into a moderator support application, because I myself have learned my lesson after my first moderator application experience with Swim. I raged at him and such, it lowered my chances. I don't want you you to have the same experience I had. Ghask, I hope you have learned your lesson.) :)
     
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    Listen to me. I didn't rage at you I was greatful for the support. If you did read my application then why did you say tone down the colours. There were barely an colours in the application and if you are trying to get other people to read that go ahead. You don't know much about me. I am mature when it's needed and a mod can have some fun and the only reason I was nice to them is because there were quotes that were actually positive. I was greatful of the 38% support ok? I'm not immature you know nothing about me. Don't go lecturing me about grammar in the quote you have numerous grammar mistakes. Thanks for the 18% support I appreciate it by just re read my app he colours are fine and questions are bolder. I'm sorry if I have offended did you I'm on my phone sorry if there are any grammar mistakes.
     
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    Take this onto a PM.
     
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    Mhm.
     

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