[Egypt][.Net] [AST]SlenderJake's Mod App

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by SlendyJake, Jul 5, 2015.

  1. Evan<3<3<3
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    same here. im trying to help you and you dont need to disagree for something i did nice.
     
  2. SlendyJake
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    Am sorry all :)
     
  3. LivingShadow
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    55% Support.
    Just make the info darker than the question. I think that would help. (Personally I find that
    red and navy makes words hard to read).
    You seem kinda new to the forums, and I don't see you helping in the forums often.
    Fix some of your grammar. Put a space after the periods, and commas.

    Disagreeing to all the no support posts makes you seem immature. They're just suggesting ways you can improve your application.
    Please be more accepting to criticism.

    Good Luck Though. :)
     
  4. Pizza
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    Took me longer than usual to read this with all the scattered capital and lowercase letters. If you can, you should probably clean it up. :)

    Also, work on activity. Take care.
     
  5. Sleepyhead08
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    lolhi.
    Full support from me, no matter what color or font you use xD
    From what I know of you, you'll deal with the position responsibly, and that's really what matters.


    EDIT: I read through the whole thing, and nearly every post has something about color... From what I see, you're getting fed up with the petty nonsense going on here. I'm afraid this is what we've come to, just try getting used to it... If you need to, just passive your way through the entirety with a smile and a "Thank you for the criticism." It'll show your maturity, even when faced by an immature bunch.
     
  6. Chiyami
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    BUT HIS GRAMMAR
     
  7. Sammmmmmmmm
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    Agreed. I wish I had this many replies on my application
     
  8. Crystal
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    The color and capitalization often becomes difficult to read. I don't base much of my support on the color or capitalization though, its just advice for him to take because others do.
     
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  9. Sleepyhead08
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    If you didn't see, I quoted people of opposing viewpoints. My point was that you can't please everyone anyway, so just do what you feel is right. If that's the way Cyp wants it, then you're perfect for the team! Otherwise, there's no need for people to tell you what's right.
     
  10. SlendyJake
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    sorry ive been inactive for a while,i dont have any means of gaming,as for my grammar i will try to fix it, thank you :)
     
  11. SlendyJake
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    please try stating what grammar,spelling mistakes i make so i can correct them :)
     
  12. TimePlaysGames
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    Also 'stating' might not be the best word.

    That would be better :)

    Good luck bro
     
  13. SlendyJake
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    Thanks
     
  14. SlendyJake
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    I tried fixing some of the grammar Check it and see if there are still more mistakes.
     

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