Rate My Drawing??

Hello forums i just wanted to ask for an opinion for my final drawing for my art class.

The quality looks weird in a picture but it's all in black and white. The theme is the 1920's/30's when American farms were getting ruined by dust storms. Thank you o3o

 

It's looking pretty good! The only thing I would say is try to be more detailed when drawing certain objects. For example, if the trees in the distant and the shapes in the front looked a little more realistic, it may look more like what you're trying to get at. Just my opinion, though. Good luck.

 

Thanks for the advice, I know the tree's look fake i was rushing i only had 5 minutes till the period ended and it's the first project of the marking period haha

 

And do you have a email i would like to send you a image

 

If you click on my name, just start a conversation with me.

 

Less unnecessary shading, more full lines.

 

This is a good drawing. You have great shading skills, just practice a little more and learn more techniques!Keep up the great work.

 

Thanks for the advice,but the project was meant for the shade to be there since the them is a Dust Storm"