A Minecraft Poem [For the creative minds]

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  1. Artificiality
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    Alright, so a lot of the forum games here are incredibly entertaining, but also very plain. Thus, I thought I'd stimulate some of the more creative minds scouring the forums, as I know there are many of you, and I am certain you'll be able to be creative in your writing too. Grammar is unimportant here, what matters is the story you tell.

    The game is very straightforward: You're allowed up to eight lines in your poem (try to keep the rhythm), and it has to fulfil two requirements: It must be related to Minecraft somehow, and it must incorporate one line from the poem before yours. I'll get us started:

    "We watch sunlight break the hilltops, tell ourselves we can explore forever more.
    Forever more we tell ourselves, although we know the moment's fleeting.
    We step into the grass, to wolves, to pigs, like many an adventurer before.
    From swamps to plains and hilltops, curious our hungry hearts a-beating.

    We reach for tools, to dive so deep, to find the secrets that our world is keeping.
    In darkness, brought to life by torches and glowing Redstone lit by rhythms of our feet.
    While on streets of villages the world across, in beds they all are sleeping.
    We see the glow from pitch-black eyes, the light green skin, the "tsst", RETREAT!"
     
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    We watch sunlight break the hilltops, knowing what adventures lie ahead.
    Though we see the creepers in the distance, we keep our emotions red.
    Red. The color keeps us going. Stride forward, young player.
    We break the ground, going down, dirt by cobble, layer by layer.

    But wait! Not straight down! Do you know the dangers below?
    Fore there are monsters of sorts, go on, get your sword!
    Diamonds, coal, iron and redstone.
    The many wonderous oars down below.
     
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    Minecraft, a place of adventure, only for the imaginative.
    Begin your journey, with your mind full of pride.
    Exploring the biomes that are always active.
    Searching for something, far and wide.

    Mine for those ore that are so fond of.
    Diamonds, coal, iron and redstone.
    Build your land with the blocks you love.
    After all, this is a game you should know.
     
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    As I walk around the everlasting world,
    Exploring the biomes that are always active,
    I see the villagers I want to take home,
    And keep captive

    As the beautiful sunset arises,
    My fears appear
    Creepers, skeletons, and zombies
    They are always somewhere near

    I block myself in with dirt,
    Hoping to stay away
    I hear the monsters burning
    I run home, panting, and all I can say is "hurray!"
     
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    Begin your journey with your mind full of pride,
    Let the moonlight dance in its glory at the tip of your shoe.
    Prepare for the savage, do not let the spiders inside.
    We have so little time in our hands, we have so much to do.

    From zombies to blazes, they catch us one by one.
    Denying defeat and gritting our teeth, forcefully swinging our blade.
    In the lands of such beauty, I wonder will we see the sun?
    We string up our bows, kiss sunlight farewell, as the hilltops slowly fade.
     
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    Haha, I beat you :heart:
    Good poem tho!!
     
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    I finally climbed my monstrous tower.
    And realized I must get home within the hour!
    For creatures that lurk, are not very nice.
    They'd eat me like a pie, with some spice!

    I found the monsters who wished to mettle.
    It appeared we had a fight to settle.
    I whipped out my my sword, took a big swing,
    Just as my alarm clock began to ring.
     
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    Dagnabbit! You were too fast, Fun! Alright better move on to tkjpie's:

    I finally climbed my monstrous tower, brick by brick, I built it all.
    Moved from caverns to taverns and up, 'till we stood on castle walls.
    In the horrors of night we mustered our power, oh, how we stood tall.
    Defend this place from bottom to top, 'till we are cornered in our halls.

    We crawled the deserts, we sailed the seas, to find the perfect home.
    With the beauty of the wide horizon always in the corner of our eyes.
    When we found a place for tired souls, to rest, to not feel so alone,
    We brought home all our memories, in which our never-ending story lies.
     
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    We voyaged the ocean, raided much plunder.
    But one day, I made a careless blunder.
    We were sailing straight, into the Nether.
    Everything failed, even the weather!

    At last we escaped, back to our home.
    The gigantic brick, fortified dome.
    We saw them coming, bit by bit.
    We readied our arrows, in the fire they were lit.
     
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    Dear Lord, you guys are talented! This is going to be fun.
     
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    Lava Ice Pic and Tree
    Cobblestone Generator
    Starvation Sets In

    A Skyblock Haiku
    by, Pile
     
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    Minecraft, a journey, a wonderful land,
    With all that one mind can conceive,
    From lava to spiders, Nether portals to sand,
    And so many great things to achieve.


    Start punching wood, build a shelter, mine stone,
    Go exploring through jungles and caves,
    Brandish a sword and kill zombies and creepers,
    Or sit down and watch ocean waves.


    There's many more things that a player can do,
    But when night settles in, stay in hiding,
    Or if you are adventurous, then go out and slay mobs,
    Get things the monsters are providing.


    Now you know about Minecraft, and it's great, am I right?
    It's for fun, not just losing and winning.
    Now just wait! Don't leave yet! This is unfinished work!
    In fact, this is just the beginning.


    (P.S. This actually didn't take that long to write. You can tell by the context. And a few lines don't really make much sense. It might even be grammatically incorrect in some areas.)
    (P.P.S. This is the longest poetry I've ever written.)
    (P.P.P.S. Extra "P.S."s are overrated. That's why I refer to the helpful extra "P"s.)
     
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    (This story is about the elven prince, during the final battle of the war for the elven throne)

    The elven king swung his divine sword
    Cutting through man and metal
    A tool of his wrath
    Where he roamed,
    laid a desolate path.
    The wasteland of yonder,
    the old promised land
    If he played poker...
    He'd have the winning hand.

    (I made this up in 40 seconds :s couldn't think
     
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    Minecraft is awesome.




    -Amazing poem by Peop
     
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    We cannot feel the winds that blow our hair,
    While exploring the open plains
    We cannot see the leaves of trees rustle
    Nor can we smell the flowers that grow

    We may not see beams of light glow upon our faces
    Or fell the refreshing splash of a river.
    We may hold diamonds in our hands
    But never see them gleam

    The blocks we collect may be our achievements
    But we never feel the sweat on our brow
    We work so hard for seemingly nothing
    We rarely know our goals

    We are the people of minecraft
    Two blocks tall
    The largest hearts
    The biggest ideas

    Minecraft is awesome
    It is just not a "game"
    A place for lost souls
    A a place of no pain


    Art knows i suck at poetry already :3
     
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    Minecraft is not a "game"
    It is a way of life
    Only the wisest can comprehend
    It has many aspects
    Just like how diverse is nature

    Creative is for those who want to build
    Things that cannot be done here
    From a house to pixel art
    One's dreams and ideas can be expressed here

    Adventure maps are for those who seek the unknown
    Who thrive for adredilin
    From parkour to puzzle and many more
    Playing with friends
    Building team work

    Mods are for people wanting more
    To do more kinds of stuff
    Not found on vanilla
    From improving gameplay to adding more items
    Every mod is a unique one

    Texture packs are for those who want to see the world in a different way
    In a different perspective
    To change how blocks look

    Servers are for people who seek minigames
    From skyblock to The Walls
    Many different minigames
    Catering to everyone's wants
    Every server is a community
    It is where friends are made
    Those who share the same
    Raw burning passion

    But skyblock.net is something more
    It is not where friends are made
    It is where one's spouse is found
    It is also where many everlasting friendships are formed
    Many love the server
    I do
    What about you?
     
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    What started as idea
    flowered into a game
    that only the wisest can comprehend
    and the creative cherishes
    we build until our hand hurt
    brilliant ideas fill the screen
    our fears, our lives, our hopes
    what our heart desires.

    What started as an idea
    hosted our minds,
    connected to our souls
    and fed on imagination
    We fight, we survive we challenge ourselves
    we toil, we mine, we explore
    the idea they called minecraft
    now engraved in us, til death do we part
     
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    When one first spawns in, all this is new.
    Where is the vast land, and ocean so blue?
    A small patch of land, be careful there and don't slip!
    Over that edge, an endless void, so get your grip.

    This new sky world of floating islands sure is a test.
    But meet that challenge, for when we try to be the best,
    We come together, and a brand new dream is what aspires.
    We will dream and build, and that is truely what our heart desires.

    ((Uhm... I tried. XD That's really all I can say. Heh.))
     
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    Am I supposed to write a poem here? ok, here: Poems are hard, Bacon is red, BACON!!!
     
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    Bacon is chewy.
    I like playing my skyblock.
    Never go to bed.

    EL HAIKU

    ~John
     
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