TheBoneBreakz's Trial Mod Application [.Net]

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  1. TheBoneBreakz
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    Username
    My in game name is Me_Bone_Breaker but i am more know as TheBoneBreakz because of my nickname.

    Age 11

    Language
    I only speak English but i am learning Indonesian at school right now.

    How Much And If I Have Been Banned If Yes Why
    I have never been banned but i have been disconnected by a [Mod] before. Because of character spam when the server lags or if I use capital letters.

    Why I Should Be Mod
    I think i should be [Mod] because i always have a lot of spear time up my sleeve to help out the community and people with questions and help I am very trustful and a nice person I know what to ban people for. I have great socail skills and intellergence the answer questions from people.

    Leadership
    I have always volunteered for activities that require leadership skills. In my primary years, or the first 6 years of my schooling, I took part in being a School Captian, a group of kid that make some decessions for the school which I developed leadership skills from. I then joined a Football team, where I was placed Junior Team Captian. I enjoy being responsible for the leadership of a group or team. Leadership and moderation go naturally together, as a Mod needs skills in the area of Leadership to point players in the right direction, and set a positive example for those who look up to them. I uphold this quality by pointing people in the right direction.


    Organisation
    I am a very organised person because of my OCD and preparing for major events and setting stuff up. I also was a Faction Captain in year 5 which meant i had to set up all the stuff for sport events and school carnivals I also had to set up for interschool events so i had to be on time and ready which I was.

    Maturity
    Maturity is obviously a huge contributor to Moderation. I consider myself to be a atleast half mature person as i am younger and I display this in everything I do. You will only you see me swear, or cuss if im tired or upset i do NOT break rules if I know them. I always ensure i try my best to be mature and try to be mature in everything I do.


    How long can I be Acvtive on Servers
    My schedule goes as follows:

    Monday - 3 to 4 hours
    Tuesday - 2 to 6 hours
    Wednesday - 3 to 5 hours
    Thursday - 3 to 4 hours
    Friday - 3 to 5 hours
    Saturday - 3 to 7 hours
    Sunday - 3 to 4 hours


    Note: The above times may be subject to change due to extra activities or school work. I also got to my Mums house ever seconde weekend so the schedule might be different :)

    Thank You
    Thank you for reading my application and taking your time to read it hope you enjoyed :)

    Note: some of this might follow the patten Finicals did because I picked that one out as a base to help me
    and some of it might be a little bit the same because I had little time to use this computer and could'nt write all of that because I dont know if I can use the computer tommorow.

    Signed -Me_Bone_Breaker... Aka TheBoneBreakz
     
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  2. TheBoneBreakz
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    TheBoneBreakz New Member

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    im new srry if its not good
     
  3. bentener
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    bentener Well-Known Member

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    Well written application!
    60% Support
    Need to be active on fourms ;) I will change if you become active.
     
  4. TheBoneBreakz
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    srry im new to forums
     
  5. Archie
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    Archie Member

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    No support. This is a pretty good WRITEN application, just not too long. Never seen you help but I may change my mind later!
    Kind regards
    ~Archie
     
  6. Weiss
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    Weiss Well-Known Member

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    Your new? Maybe try to play more and earn "Member".

    No Support

    >Be more active
    >Work on spelling mistakes
    >Help more in game/forums
    >Be more active on forums
    >Add more detail

    Good luck!
     
  7. Config
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    Config Well-Known Member

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    Written?
     
  8. Archie
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    Archie Member

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    Just saw you help ALOT, FULL SUPPORT :)
     
  9. Finical
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    Alright, some constructive criticism and improvements include:

    > The colour scheme could be improved, here's an error I can point out: [​IMG]
    > Work on Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation, also attempt helping more in-game and on the Forums, as
    a Moderator is required to moderate both areas.
    > Make the application longer by revising and including more detail where necessary.

    80% Support for now.
    Good Luck :)
     
  10. TheBoneBreakz
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    eunice epiphany Premium

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    Good luck aha.
     
  12. TheBoneBreakz
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  13. Mai
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    Mai serendipity Discord Moderator Discord Administrator Premium Premium

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    First off, your application doesn't really say much about you.
    -Write more under the "Why do you think you should be a Mod section".
    -You don't really have to bold/color the word "Mod", but you can do what you want with that.
    -Capitalize all the letters that need to be, and fix some of the grammatical errors.

    Your activity.
    -You're a New Member.. Get used to the community and the forums itself. Help out more on forums. (Help, Suggestions).
    -Don't see you much in-game.

    You haven't really used the format directly which makes it hard for us to note down everything you said, such as your timezone.

    No Support, for now.
    Good luck :)
     
  14. Config
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    Config Well-Known Member

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    Please work on your language and try to sound professional.
     
  15. Isobella
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    Really, this is a serious application. Please treat it that way.
     
  16. bERYbERRY
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    bERYbERRY c000000000000000kies Builder Premium

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    ^^
    Don't say "thx" "m8". Just try to sound professional as orange stated
     
  17. TheBoneBreakz
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    But i assume Finical is my mate that's why I said that or I just would of shut my gob.
     
  18. fluffymonster209
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    full! support well written and detailed I've have seen you on and ive seen you help others :3

    fluffy :)-
    Changed from 80% to 100% :heart:
     
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  19. tomtomiko
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    No support,

    ~ Grammar mistakes, that gives off a bad impression
    ~Add more detail
    ~ More effort needed
    ~ Not active at all

    Good luck

    ~Tom :)
     
  20. TheBoneBreakz
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    wait not active on the server or forums because i already know im not active on forums
     

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