TheBowler_Plays's T-Mod Application [.Net]

It seems as if you can't take criticism, since you rated me with a dislike.

 

Sorry, but i was just joking about the Too Lazy, i was really tired @ 10:00 PM when i made this yesterday..

 

Btw the "Dislike" on the original post was actually the first one on here.

 

That's not what I was talking about though.
It seems that you aren't putting in any effort, because of the grammar mistakes in your comments, and you aren't able to take criticism.

 

It doesn't matter if it was or wasn't the first one here.
It's just the fact that you rated it with a dislike shows that you can't take criticism.

 

Ok, but im currently trying to edit my mod app, but i cant because when someone replies, my phone and ipad keep sending the email notifications about the replies.

 

No support.
Why:
-Staff Commands are unnecessary
-This lacks tons of detail
-Stating you have donor is unnecessary
-Never seen you online helping

~Goodluck~
~Wolverine~

 

Saying that you are too lazy or tired shows that you couldn't care less about this application and opportunity to become moderator.

 

Don't use text talk. Makes you look immature.

 

Err, well if you want to be a mod, you can't be lazy, unless you have a lot of school work or something like me, I have 10 hours of school
Neutral for now
:chicken

 

(click for full experience)​

So we meet again, Luke Bowlerplays.

THERE. That is the rebel timezone! Correctly stated, I see you have grown wise to the ways of the Review.

Haste leads to errors, errors lead to sentences like these. Correct your "currently fluently", and calm yourself until you can rewrite this into non-gibberish. It is hard to sense your meaning behind "learning other languages when you can fluently speak Spanish".

A true Applicant seeks always to use spell-check, Typo Calrissian. Correct your use of "grief". We are all very sad by your struggles with a tree, but consider letting go and simply saying "Yes, for chopping down someone's tree."

Yesss... much bitterness do I sense here. Anger for items, subtle bragging... this is a Sith in the making, struck down early by a Mod Knight. Remove this part and quietly plot revenge, young warrior.

The Farce is strong with this one... I will need another drink.







Continue, we shall.

Mod Knights struggle with these problems. Grief... scams... always they seek to pull us down. +1 to you for this goal. Be wary of your spelling, Bowler.

Size matters not.​

The strength of one Moderator is enough to quiet an entire legion of bots. With or without Jar-Jar "Die In A Fire" Binks.

"Mostly All Of The Time" is a very interesting concept. Have you perhaps done the Kessel Run in twelve parsecs?

Be careful with your confidence unless you want others to think you arrogant. Rely on your teammates and do the best you can; stopping everything is impossible. Follow your guidelines, work through the punishment scales and most of all: Don't take it personally.

I have a bad feeling about this part...​

Sometimes it is difficult to solve a problem while finding answers to it. -wise nod- Perhaps consider a rewrite?

You Have Failed Me For the Last Time, Grammar.​

"Type fast and typing fast" is hobospeech. Remove.
"Typing quickly to help on typing" is ludicrous, reword or remove.

When I got to "Way more stuff(s) faster is there are any" I blacked out and woke up beating my computer to death with a tear-stained copy of Strunk & White.

Correct this section, Bowling. Or strike it out completely, typing speed isn't a very good "qualification" to begin with. My opinion means nothing, do whatever you like.

What is your message here?​

I find your lack of faith... disturbing. This sounds like you are saying it is not possible to be active on the server and also drinking a soda.

I think I understand, my young Sith trainee. You wish to help problems and scammers like Darth Sailorbot. You also crave the power and attention of true Moderators. You will do well if you take the time to correct this portion until it begins to make sense.

Jedi Mind Tricks only work on the weak of will. You are repeating yourself over and over. You have already stated how much you hate spammers, "greifers" and hackers and what you would do to them. Likewise you've already told us twice that you will be online "mostly all the time" (?!). You repeat you'll be very active on the forums and in-game once again in the same paragraph, then state for the third time how helpful you are.

Pretend this section is Alderaan and you are the Death Star. #NukeIt

Or not. My opinions are worthless sir.

Mod, or do not Mod. There is no YouTube.

Perhaps you should pause and consider your application, Bowl. So far you've said:

1. You'll be online "mostly all the time".
2. Moderators need to be very active on the server, not drinking or eating.
3. You'll get bored and go play on your personal server and/or watch YouTube.

The odds of successfully navigating these statements are one hundred thousand to negative one. Rewrite your qualifications so they don't contradict each other, please.

Did you kill them all, Ani??

Ani! You killed them all! What will we do?!

Remove this entire section except for the size 6 bold red text. That was some amazing backstory and filler, but it isn't helping you much sir.

I would give you a hand, if I hadn't lost it in Cloud City. Very interesting read, you may have some slight corrections to make sir.

Support Status: 1000 Years In A Sarlacc Pit​

 

No Support,
Your last application was a giant flame war, but how you handled it might show how much better you are for the position than someone else. But, that wasn't really the case, and you even joined in and got very emotional, which only showed me and others how you are not ready for the position, and you're not mature enough yet. And that first post stating please no flame wars is basically sort of asking for some. Just try not to mention your old application is you truly want a new start. Ok, so the application has a couple issues but I'm not going to go into them because Myrmidous already did. But I don't really think you need to mention sailorbot when talking about people scamming others. He was already taken care of. Now, I might be able to change this support if I see a drastic change of attitude and maturity. But, so far I guess you can start by not rating criticism by others with a negative rating and being more active. I haven't seen you online in ages. Good luck though.

 

Thanks!

 

No support. Reasons stated above

 

No support.

 

Ok Guys! I Really Have been thinking about something...

Hi

 

BTW, The Mod Wars this is Really Cool!! ;D

 

BTW, The Mod Wars this is Really Cool!! ;D

and BTW thanks for the cool YT intro XD. And the sad thing is, I can't monetize the video because it has "Copyrighted Music"

 

No support.