Can I be Mod?

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by carsons13, Nov 28, 2015.

  1. carsons13
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    Dear Person Looking at my App,
    I really love your server I have bought things and I have a really good island (to me)! That is why I am coming to you to apply for Mod.

    Your in-game name: Don't know how to check but I started about 1 1/2 years ago!

    Which timezone are you in? I live in the USA in the State of Arizona so I am Mountain Standard Time!

    Which languages do you speak? I speak only English Sorry!

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?) I have been banned on your server by Roblox but, I don't know why he never told my friends why I was and then I got unbanned. Honestly I do not know why I was banned sorry.

    Why do you think you should be a mod? I think I should be a mod because I have experience with being staff on multiple servers. I also play on your server a lot! I know I just made this account, but for this very reason. If I don't get accepted I do not care but I would still really like to be accepted.

    How long can you be active on the server every day? I can be active every day for about 5-7 hours!

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator? Well yes but no at the same time, I have been Admin on 3 servers and Builder+ on another server (if you look at my island you will see why). I also was Owner on my friends server. ( but its my friends so you don't care probably)!

    I hope I get accepted, If not I am sorry for wasting your time.

    Sincerely,
    Carson (CarsonS13)
     
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    I think that you should consider reading this before making a moderator application, as well as looking at other people's applications to see your competition.
     
  3. bERYbERRY
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    I agree with lemonade
     
  4. carsons13
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    So is that a No?
     
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    I think its a "Good Luck"
     
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    Well this is what I'm talking about. You should read applications to realize that support or no support doesn't matter to others other than the applicant. I don't "support" or "not support" people that I don't really know, I just give them advice to become a better applicant.
     
  7. carsons13
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    I just want an Answer please Yes or No
     
  8. Lemonade
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    No.
     
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    By looking at the title the answer is obvious.

    It's the word you say when you die on minecraft.
    That one word you say when someone asks you for stuff,

    It's the one word you say to yourself when you see chocolate ice cream.

    What's the word?
     
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    Thats funny!
     
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    Can you change your application title to [Country Name] (UserName Or Nickname)'s Mod Application
     
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    No Support.

    -Never seen you on and helping (You are currently on and I messaged you)

    -Add more details.

    -Add Colors and font.
     
  13. SkiCen
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    Woah. You only got to the forums today. I would take a bit of time to learn the forums things too.
    Never have I once seen you online/helping.
    I agree with Lem, app is not set up to mod app standards (heading, and personality too short)

    I wish you the best of luck.
     
  14. LivingShadow
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    No Support.
    Never seen you on before.
    Add much more detail.
    Add a bit more color to it.
    Underline, and Bold the important information.
    Good Luck for Now. :)
     
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    no ty
     
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    I'll see what feedback I can provide you, Carsons.

    - The system of feedback here does not run on "yes"s and "no"s. The way that Mod application feedback works here is a system of support versus no support given by players and current moderators, or neutral if neutral is stated in the post or a matter of support/no support is not mentioned. Truly, though, being supported or being given no support hardly contributes to if the Administrator (CypriotMerkz, which you should know before applying anyway) promotes you to a staff position, if at all. Feedback is purely there to benefit you.

    Also, in most cases, applications are not accepted immediately.

    - Your application lacks a lot of detail. If I were you, I'd look at the section here for accepted applications. People spend a lot of time composing their applications. Meanwhile, yours looks like it took no more than 5 minutes to create.

    - Your grammar needs a bit of work. I see many missing commas.

    - Spend a bit more time on the forums before applying. Become familiar with them, as moderators must be active on them as well as in-game.

    - Island quality has absolutely nothing to do with being a moderator. Mention of anything along the lines of build quality in your application is irrelevant information. This thread may benefit you if you read it.

    - Your In-game name (IGN) is the name that you selected as your username when you created your minecraft account. It's displayed when you put a message in global chat, or the account that is displayed in the bottom right corner of your minecraft launcher when booting up minecraft.

    As for support/no support/neutral, I'm neutral at the moment. I don't know you well enough to give you a fair judgement on how you would be as a staff member.
     
  17. Nena
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    No Support, why?:
    We don't use yes's and no's: How we judge applications is by supporting or not supporting. We don't use "yes' or "no" as an answer. If we're in between, we use the word neutral.

    You lack detail: Your application lacks a lot of detail in the important sections. Add more from suggestions other people gave you.

    New to forums: Get used to how the forums work and interact with others.
    Islands don't matter: No matter how fancy your island is, it doesn't matter. Being a mod takes a big responsibility. You have to take care of the server you're working for and the forums. You have to help out a lot and mute/kick/(temp)ban as necessary.

    How to find your In-game name: When speaking in chat, your username pops up. You can also find it by logging into Minecraft with your account details.

    This is my own opinion but I feel like there's excessive exclamation. Grammatical errors also linger here. I see a lot of commas put in and some that are not supposed to be in there. If you don't care about getting accepted, then what's the point?... And then after that you say you still want to be accepted? I'm confused here, explain.

    Good luck~


     
  18. CJ_Plays_Games
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    Also something to include with this is donor ranks don't matter. It is even stated not to include that your a donor. I would take the time to read accepted mod apps, and learn on what you need to do.

    Someone came to me with this statement.
    be active,
    be helpful,
    be honest.

    Also the "Three A's" You can follow someone told me.
    • Assist in the Help Section
    • Analyse and suggest ways to improve Mod Apps of others
    • Answer questions in-game
    You don't have to do all of this, but they can help. Always try and don't give up.
     
  19. TheSugarCane
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    The fact that you don't even know your in game name concerns me. The application itself lacks a lot of detail, so I suggest elaborating on the "Why do you think you should be a mod?" section. Also, in your application you stated "If I don't get accepted I do not care but I would still really like to be accepted." - if you don't care about becoming a Mod, why are you applying? I don't think you're serious about becoming a Moderator.
     
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    What is your ign? If you don't say your ign even if you get accepted how will Cyp know who to promote?
     

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