No support,
Reasons stated above

 

I told you I they aren't the main focus on here. They are optional

 

This makes me feel as if you're doubting yourself. You shouldn't "try" to get on as much as possible. You should get on whenever you wish to. This statement just takes away confidence in yourself.

Unnecessary. If you need to include it, it should be under the proper category (Time, Schedule, whatever you want to call it). Also, the topics jump a lot. You start from how you "try" to get online, to thanking mods, and then back to time.

Well you should obviously be giving your best when creating an application. Also, the part about getting people to limit colors.. just seems random and unneeded.

You start off by saying "I would like to earn Mod because since I'm on a lot, it would be easy" Then you end it off by saying, "I know it may be a challenge, but I'm ready to take it"

This was only the introduction. I'm sorry, but no support. This application appears as messy and just unorganized. You'll have to do really well to change my mind on my thoughts so far, but there's always a slight chance.

Good Luck.

 

Ok

 

This was well written but explain why you were banned and I personally haven't seen you help all that much. Ill be neutral for right now 3

 

Ok thanks! I thought I explained it pretty good but I will add on. Thanks for the neutral though!!!

 

1. Okay, saying "try" is saying that the person actually wants to get on the server and doesn't take away any confidence whatsoever. I don't understand what your point is.

2. The introduction is actually a good thing to include because it tells you a little about the person. Many people add introductions to their applications so this shouldn't be an issue or your concern.

3. When Agent said to "Limit the colors", she means that it hurts her eyes to see bright colors on comments or applications just like many other people.

4. She means it would be easy because she gets how to moderator around as she has seen it happen but, it may be partly a challenge because of the amount of people and she explains she is ready and can take it.

5. It is organized because there is a label above each section and is bolded.

 

It is ok. I fixed it. Thanks though!!

 

You welcome. I just completely disagreed with that guy so I wanted to tell him why I disagreed.

 

I did too. I kinda just want others to be happy. That's why when Blurted caught a scammer when creeper_boom and I, got scammed. I gave him 27 of my 53 grass. I wanted him to be happy

 

Looks a lot better now.

 

Thanks. Do you give any support??

 

I'm still seeing errors in the application.

This is an application, not a motivational speech about not giving up. I suggest you correct this, and remain mature throughout the paragraph.

You totally lost me at this part. It got more confusing, and even more messy here. Remember, remain professional.

But you can help. Answer questions in chat, record scammers and report rule breakers. A Mod tag is not necessary for a player to help. You keep going off-topic with your words, and instead of an organized paragraph, all your points are everywhere. In game, I've never seen you helping, and instead usually playing around with friends.

Still, no support. I still see major flaws throughout the application, and a lot of signs of immaturity. Let me know if you want more corrections, and ways to improve.

 

No support.

-Reasons stated by other members .

Goodluck cx

 

I help out a ton. Just when I search up your name, you aren't on. So you cannot see that. I am trying my hardest to show you I am mature but it is hard on an online chat

 

Ok. I am trying my best to fix it. Please just wait while I am fixing this.

 

Me? I'm on whenever You shouldn't have to search up my name only to prove to me that you're helpful. You should always be helpful.

There's no purpose in showing others. The only one you need to impress is yourself. (And Cyp)

 

Fix being helpful or mature. I believe you meant improve?

 

No fix what other

 

No fix what others said