my mod application

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  1. dell195
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    In game name dell195
    I am In England
    I speak English and a bit French
    Yes because I was greifing
    I think I should be a mod because I have good ideas and I am quite active on the server
    I am active for about 2 hours
    I have no experience
     
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  2. dell195
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    I help people out on the server as well
     
  3. angelkitten
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    Ok,
    Needs more info,
    put the questions in and bold them.
    Be on the forums more.
    25% support, sorry!
     
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    No support for now add more detail color and bold questions
     
  5. bkleinman1
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    While i agree you need to put a lot more time and effort into this application, i disagree with the two posts above. Maybe its just me, but i think that the colour, and formatting that some go to while creating an app, just lowers the professionality of it, when in reality its the professionalism in an application that you want to portray, rather than the contrary.

    I would recommend taking a look at others applications and changing yours based on your findings.

    No support for now, improve and i may re-consider.
     
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    Ok tux
     
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    In game name = dell195

    I am from England

    I can speak English and a small bit French

    I have been banned once for greifing but never to be done again

    I think I should be a mod because I have good building ideas and I am quite active on the server I also help people out on the server and I have been going on the server for about a year.

    I can be on for about 2-3 hours a day

    I have never been a mod but I would really like to

    Please support me thx
     
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    You STILL need more info, make it so we can READ it. You also still need alot more time on the forums. Take time to look at others apps. 0% support (no improvement/hurts eyes)
     
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    And maybe go into the edit place, and do it in the actul place like...

    gahk;
    Edited:bye
     
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    I agree wit Angel.
     
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    The only question you added was What is your IGN?, you need to add them all.
     
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    My in game name is : dell195

    I am from England (London)

    The languages I can speak are : English and a small amount French

    I have been banned once for greifing but I will never do it again

    I think I should be a mod because I have good building ideas and I help people out I am on the server as.much as I can and I have been using the server for over a year so I know how it works and what not and what is.Ok to do

    I am active for about 2-3 hours on weekdays and when ever I want on weekend s

    I have never been a mod but I would love to be one. I have got my own server so I no how it works

    PLZ SUPPORT ME THX
     
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    That Blue is Blinding (O_O) try to make it a darker color, and add A lot of detail into your app...
     
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    I did that above I think
     
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    Is this a genuine application?

    If so, then you have ignored everything i said before, there is still minimal effort that has gone into this. There are grammatical errors all over the place which really don't go in your favour while being formal. Re-read my old post if you want to even stand a chance in this being looked at.

    If you had done what I suggested, and took a look at others applications, maybe you wouldn't be representing yourself with this shoddy app. Most people have written about 500 to 1000 words, i'm not going to waste my time explaining why they would be preferable of your 50 words at most.

    I hope you take what i have stated into consideration,
    Barnaby
     
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    ok sos
     
  18. angelkitten
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    still needs moree xD
     
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    ok sos
     
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    What isyour in game name- my in game name is dell195

    Where are u from- I am England

    What languages do u speak- I can speak English and a small bit French

    Why do you think you should be mod?- I think I should be mod because I have been playing for a long time and want to up my game I have always wanted to be part of the sky block team and do good for the server. Ever since I started I have wanted to be a mod or part or the the team. I think I would be a good help on the server because although I'm only a 25 donor I always try to be as helpful as posible.

    How long can u be active on the server- I can be on for about 2-3 hours on weekdays and as long as I want on weekends

    Do u have any past experience as a mod- well apart from my server no not really

    What will u contribute to the server- good help full ideas for future builds and do what ever I have to do to keep the server clean from griefers and rule breakers

    Have you ever been banned- yes once for greifing but it is never going to be done a again.

    THANKS FOR READING GUYS AND GALS I HOPE U LIKE IT

    PLZ SUPPORT ME FOR MOD
     

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