Mod Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Avax Retro, Feb 4, 2016.

  1. Avax Retro
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    Avax Retro New Member

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    Ig: Avax_Retro
    Time zone: Eastern
    Languages: English
    Have I ever been banned? No
    Why do I think I should be mod: I love helping people with problems that they may encounter. I am a very fun person to be with and I'm a very good problem solver. I am a critical thinker in general
    How active can I be?: I am on everyday
    Do you have any experience?: yes I am a co-owner on a server that was recently shut down for reasons, people on there said I was a very good staff and helped with a lot of problems they have.
    Thank you for your time and I hope I can help the server! :D
     
    Last edited: Feb 4, 2016
  2. Nena
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    Nena Experienced Member

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    Your in-game name:
    Which timezone are you in?
    Which languages do you speak?
    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
    Follow the template.
     
  3. Avax Retro
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    Avax Retro New Member

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    Better?
     
  4. Quantieee
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    Quantieee Well-Known Member

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    No Support!
    ~ Not active on forums/in-game
    ~ Don't help people in-game
    ^^ Timezone
    ~ Need more information
    ~ Need more colour/bold
     
  5. Config
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    Config Well-Known Member

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    No Support.
    Extend you application and it is too short.
    Good luck
     
  6. Jess
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    Jess Senior Member

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    I'm in a mood to insult people right now, so let's do this. First off, don't see this as a review, this is literally just straight up criticism in a post. Secondly, your application is shorter than my first boyfriend's p***s.
     
  7. Wadee
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    Wadee Senior Member Premium

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    1.) How helpful is this player? Not-Helpful.
    2.) How active is this player? Not-Active.
    3.) Is this player mature? No.
    4.) What's the players background? Okay.
    5.) How experienced is this player? I don't know.
    6.) How detailed is the application? Not-Detailed.
    7.) Does this app need more info? Yes.
    8.) Did this app follow the correct format? Yes.
    9.) Do I Support? No (Never Will) (Reason: Your Past)
     
  8. Myrmidous
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    Myrmidous Well-Known Member Premium

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    Avax Retro -- Take Halzii's post, remove the swearing and add more jokes -- you would have my review. Since Halzii did such a great job of stealing my thunder I'll just hit the highlights.

    Your application is short. This is fine when the writing covers all topics while giving an idea of the kind of person you are. In your case you've gone for "bare minimum", sir. We have no idea what your personality is like.

    The "Why Should I Be a Mod" response is actually a very good stub for a full section. Use each of those sentences as a topic and then expand on it. For example your "I'm a very fun person to be with" could be a section header such as "Very Social" with several lines of how the people around you feel better while playing the game. Don't copy that; just an example.

    Post a schedule, or if you don't have a set schedule at least try to give an idea of when you'll be on. "Three hours in the afternoon on weekdays" would be fine. More details are better.

    I don't see you online right now or I would send you a /msg. PM me if you'd like to discuss.
     
  9. BriPlaysMC
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    BriPlaysMC Member

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    No Support... Right now.

    ~new member on forums
    ~have not seen you online (time zones?)
    ~Needs WAY more detail

    Good Luck!

    P.S. I do see potential, so keep working!
     
  10. Stel
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    Stel Guest

    Haha no
     

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