Mod App, IGN Thomascolby

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  1. tomcolby
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    tomcolby Member

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    Your in-game name:
    Thomas Colby


    Which timezone are you in?
    Gulf Time Zone (UTC+04:00)

    Which languages do you speak?
    I speak English only.

    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    Yes I have been banned; it was because I was griefing my brother Matthew for fun, but things got out of hand and then he got sad and called out for a moderator, getting me banned for severely days .

    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    I would like to become a Moderator of this server because I love watching people have fun meeting new friends and just having fun, but there are some bad people on the sever e.g. spammers. So I think that I have what it takes to become a Moderator and get rid of spammers, hackers and people who just make the server an un-pleasent place to be I believe I can fix this. I am on minecraft a lot because I am a no-life I am on this server a lot too. I am fully dedicated 24/7 to helping this server to grow even bigger and be the positively best server ever (which it already is).
    I also have all the traits needed to become a good moderator:
    Helpful
    Welcoming
    Un-biased
    Mature in age and attitude
    Popular
    Knowledgeable
    Trustworthy




    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Sunday(School Day for me) 3 Hours
    Monday(School) 3 Hours
    Tuesday(School) 3 Hours
    Wednesday(school) 3 Hours
    Thursday(half day) 5 Hours
    Friday(No School) 6-7 Hours
    Saturday(No School) 6-7 Hours

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?

    No but I believe it will be a good experience and I also believe it will make the sever a more enjoyable place for everyone.

    Thank You For Reading My Application and Have A Great Day

     
  2. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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    No Support,
    • Needs a lot more detail
    • Use Bold and Underline used to highlight or make things stand out, e.g titles
    • Never seen you online (Timezones maybe)
    • Never seen you on the forums (Timezones maybe)
    • Check grammar. E.g 'severely days'
    Good Luck!
     
  3. Love__
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    Love__ Well-Known Member

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    I agree with Shadoe, this application needs more detail, Try adding more to the "Why I should be mod" section. I don't see you in-game very often, that's the same for the forums. I will just leave it at that for now.
    Good Luck!
     
  4. Crawling
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    Crawling Active Member

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    When Shadoe said use bold, he didn't mean bold the whole thing! :eek:

    Other than that, it needs a ton more detail.
     
  5. Chiyami
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    Chiyami Experienced Member

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  6. matthewcolby
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    matthewcolby New Member

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    he's my bro so u wont see him online same timezone as me
     
  7. matthewcolby
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    matthewcolby New Member

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    he's my bro so u wont see him online same timezone as me
     
  8. Dubz
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    Dubz Active Member

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    Your spelling is off a lot like "several" spelled "severely" and "server" spelled "sever". Also, this application needs improved a bit more than it is right now. Finally, I have never seen you online at all helping or just in general. Kind regards, Dubz.
     
  9. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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    ItzMeDubz Why the bad spelling rate on my post above?
     
  10. Quantieee
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    Quantieee Well-Known Member

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    Correct spelling and add more information
     
  11. Dubz
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    Dubz Active Member

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    Shadoe lol accidently clicked it xp sorry
     
  12. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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  13. Layla
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    Layla Active Member

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    Agreed :)
     
  14. Crystal
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    Crystal Experienced Member

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    No Support,
    Some things to fix...

    • Add more detail about why you should get the moderator position. (Under your traits you can give examples of when you used that trait to help people.)
    • It says your a active member but however I don't see you on the server or on the forums a lot. (time zones maybe)
    • You need to correct all grammatical errors. (spelling/grammar)
    That should point out all you might want to fix in your application.
    Good Luck!
    (If You need more help feel free to contact me)
     
  15. TheSugarCane
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    TheSugarCane Senior Member

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    This application is okay, but it needs a lot more detail. The colours for some of the titles are too bright and hard to read. Don't bold out your answers, only your titles, or it makes it look unprofessional. I don't recall seeing you in game and therefore have never seen you to judge how you act. As for your forums activity, you are not active. When you're a moderator, you moderate the forums, not just in game. Your spelling and grammar are fine as far as I'm aware. Good luck.
     

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