Master_Bostock-Moderator Application

Discussion in 'Denied Applications' started by Master_Bostock, May 12, 2015.

  1. Master_Bostock
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    Master_Bostock New Member

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    Your in-game name:
    Master_Bostock.

    Which timezone are you in?
    I live in England, our timezone is Western Europe, Greenwich Mean Time, BST.

    Which languages do you speak?
    English.


    Have you ever been banned? (if yes, why?)
    No.

    Why do you think you should be a mod?
    I love helping people and I believe making me a Mod will make your server a better place. I will make your server a better place by catching and banning hackers or griefers. I am a polite, friendly and helpful person with a positive outlook so I would be a good addition to your Moderator team.

    How long can you be active on the server every day?
    Everyday I spend about 1 or 2 hours on your server.

    Do you have any past experience as a moderator?
    No, but on your server I have helped many people for example: Someone told me they had been griefed, they were really upset, I helped them rebuild their island and track down the griefer.
     
  2. Lycel
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    Lycel Senior Member

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    This is a nice start, but I think you're going to need quite a bit more information ^-^ Look at some other applications with 150+ or so replies and see what I mean. I can't say I've seen you online very often, and certainly not on the forums. You need to be very active on both.
    Also there are a bunch of links to the home page throughout your application. You should probably get rid of them :p
    Good luck, Bostock! ^-^
     
  3. Master_Bostock
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    Master_Bostock New Member

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    should I get rid of it
     
  4. Love__
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    Love__ Well-Known Member

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    As Lycel said, this is a pretty good start. But this application needs more information. Try adding more to the "why I should be mod" section. Try adding some color to really grab the readers attention. Be more active. I rarely see you online and u haven't seen you on the forums very much either. Good Luck!
     
  5. Master_Bostock
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    Master_Bostock New Member

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    ok thx for the advice
     
  6. Gem
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    Gem Member

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    No support
    - new member
    - application not detailed enough

    - weird color placement


    Yes, then get the active member title and try again.
     
  7. Crawling
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    Crawling Active Member

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    First off you should organize it more and add more detail. Pretty much what most applications need, hehe. Until then, 25% support.
     
  8. Shadoe
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    Shadoe Well-Known Member

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    No Support,
    • Needs a lot more detail
    • Use Bold and Underline
    • Use Colour (Optional)
    • Space your application out a bit more
    • Never seen you online (Maybe Timezones)
    • Never seen you on the forums (Maybe Timezones)
    Good Luck!
     

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