[Competition] Wolfie's Story Writing Competition!

Tomorrow the thread will be locked at 6pm (UTC+01:00, central European time). Good luck

 

So soon?

 

Maybe on Wednesday too, okay. 4PM my time on Wednesday

 

Wolfie My story is Non fiction it is found here

 

Yay!

 

It's finally here!
This story is about a murder, so if you don't like them then please don't read it. You've been warned (It's not too graphic anyway).

I hope you liked it

 

I'm making a fairy tale because I'm too lazy to write a good story. That's what fairy tales are for right? K little comment made while I was writing this: Can't think of a good fairy tale idea so I'm just gonna write a not very well written tale about a fairy. Enjoy. Btw this is super summarised because I'm too lazy to write the full thing.
Here goes:
Once upon a time, there lived a girl. A girl named Alison. Her dream had always been to see the outside world. The world she lived in was simply a box, made to observe their every move. She was born... special. At first it was just an egg. Scientist had found a glowing egg in the middle of a crop field with everything around it obliterated. It was an unexplainable phenomenon that science simply could not explain. Not until a few years later when the egg finally hatched. The scientist were prepared for the worst. They had nukes, poison, everything. But instead, a little girl stepped out. She wasn't really a little girl. She looked just like any other middle aged woman. Just with a small body. As time passed, more eggs appeared. Scientist began to feel afraid of them. Afraid of what might happen if they set them free. So they created a room. They raised them to believe that it was the real world, when in fact, it was just a box. One day, the old fairy, being one of the few with memories of being outside the box decided to share the tale of how they came to live in the box, to a little girl. One she thought was smart enough to try to break out of the hellhole they were living in. Months pass and finally they have a plan. After observing their surroundings a bit they realised that every time one of them disappeared a giant hand would reach in through the sky. That meant that there was a hole somewhere in the box that they could escape from. Using their brains, they created something that could launch them out of the hole and let them see the beautiful world they always dreamed of. "We did it!" They look around. They see their own people being played with. They were used for experiments! They could not believe it. They felt their anger welling up in their chest. They let out a scream. *BOOM* Suddenly everything is gone. Everything but them is gone. They stand still in the endless, black abyss. Everything had been for nothing.

KKKKKK THAT'S ALL I FEEL LIKE DOING. SORRY IF IT'S BAD I DON'T REALLY WRITE THINGS.

 

[Announcement] I will not be biased in picking this, the competition will end in 1 hour! Good luck everyone! The winners will be announced tomorrow

 

ok

 

GOOD LUCK EVERYBODII

 

Good luck all

 

Please stop posting and making me have many alerts . The thread can now be locked, as enough contestants are in. FatalDisaster

 

u got my story??

 

do u know i said '' everybodii '' and not '' everybody '' COS stop living in old world

 

Yes. FatalDisaster for your considerance

 

FatalDisaster

 

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So, I wasn't able to decide and read that well for the past few days because of what happened to me last Thursday. I wasn't biased in my choices, and I am thankful to you all for taking your time to write a story here. .
The winners are:
1st place= Dough - I liked his the most because it was mysterious and very interesting
2nd place= Rolly - I liked his because it was really unique, and he even put some cool names in
3rd place= Gumo - I liked her story too, because it was full of fantasy and it was quite unique.

I am sorry to everyone else who didn't get picked this round. There will be a second competition happening in 1 week (only for the non winners and new competitors). Good luck